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Re: Oink and In the barnyard
Aw, these poems are so cute! I prefer the second one, just because it pretty much oozes tranquility. And, in a philosophical sense, it's more interesting as well. After all... ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Tiggy the Piggy
Remember is right! I have a reputation of not liking adverbs. xD Anyway, this was really cute! I like the weird stories that the father/daughter team made up. My dad ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Pig gif animation for Snoink's contest
Yay! Animations! I'm learning how to do animations now, and it's really hard! So, I'm really impressed with this, even though you did say that this was a quick effort. ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (16)
Haha, it's funny to see what you guys concentrate on! It seems like you read the chapter differently than Tanya! You focused more on Solea's relationship with Granid and she ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: The Silence of Laughter
Aww! I hope he defeats the illness! I love how you made the poem start with the grim and end with the hopeful. As far as the last stanza? Well... ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Lee Reason
Haha! What a fun read. :) One thing that I kind of wondered about was why Johnnie had a scythe at all... maybe for appearances? I'm asking because originally it ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Hello = D
Hi Chloe! What sorts of things do you write? :) Like, what's your current project? Or are you flitting between projects right now?
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Um, hi...
Yay! Evil scientists! What kinds of things do those evil scientists do?
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Hi there! :3
That sounds so neat! I tried writing something in Spanish once (my other language) but I didn't get very far. I am impressed by your dedication! :) Do you notice ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Um, hi...
Hi dragon! Wow! Several zillion story ideas in your noggin? That's quite a lot! You must be writing constantly to just be able to get through them all! :o What's ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Sparrow and Spaghetti: Chapter 4 part 2
MWHAHA! First! :D Anyway! Yup. Emma can't die this soon so they are simply curing Beth and Emma is getting in the way. Why, oh why, they didn't actually knock ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Sparrow and Spaghetti: Chapter 4 part 1
and briskly walks away. I would get rid of the adjective here! Along the edges are cheap foldable chairs. Cheap, foldable chairs remind me of those dinky plastic ones used ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Do your characters talk to you?
They don't really talk to me directly, but they do talk and it's strange. Mostly, I just eavesdrop in. The only reason why they really talk to me is if ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (16)
I was going to introduce Lomones's mate, but... well... yeah. She didn't want to show up. She's quite a private individual! But she'll show up a couple books later. And ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Can we get 2000 replies before Christmas?
21. I think. And 2000 replies is pishposh compared to what I've seen on other sites. Surely YWS can do better. IN SOVIET RUSSIA, BETTER CAN DO YWS.
Jul 26, 2011
