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Re: Swan Song (16)
Fury didn’t even begin to cover it. Over and over again, Lomones played the events back in his mind. Yes, he was stupid. He was stupid to believe any of ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (9)
Just a note, this has been revised! :)
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: How a homosexual man changed my life
Hey Becca! A quick question... is there a prompt associated with this essay? I would love to help get you into college, but they can be strict about being on ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: IfTonyBlairToldTheTruthForOneDayOurWorldWouldFallApart
Hey Super Duper! :D Okay, so! Your poem is really, really, really difficult to read. For one, it's full of gimicky bits. For example, the capitalized beginnings of each line ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Do you have a pre-writing ritual?
I close YWS... and then quit my internet, just to make sure! Also, chat things are a generally no-no during writing time.
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Dragonmaster Chapter 1: Dragon Stew*Revised*
Hi Dakota! Okay, I said that I would look at this... and here I am! I like this overall! The ending, in bold was a bit confusing, but I like ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: A brief history of boys I fancied as a teenager
Hahah! This was so cute. :) I know this sounds pretty insulting, but I love how shallow you made yourself sound. It made it seem like you had gotten over ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Cannibalism in a desperate situation
Nate, you scare me sometimes, lol.
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: I need a potentially controversional Book/Quote
This comes to mind immediately: Very violent, lol... but not at the same time.
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: Can we get 2000 replies before Christmas?
Ho-hum, pig's bum...eh? :/ PIG.
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: I need a potentially controversional Book/Quote
I like the Wizard of Oz because it inspired the GREATEST MOVIE OF ALL TIME, ZARDOZ. Is poetry out of the question? Because I can think of a bunch of ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: I need a potentially controversional Book/Quote
Can you use the Bible? Also, maybe: "The Silver Shoes," said the Good Witch, "have wonderful powers. And one of the most curious things about them is that they can ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: Shop on Amazon? How you can help YWS at no cost
This makes me happy! :D
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Boys in PE
Hi empress! :) Their limbs are knotted, coiled, and sleek. Their voices are : tuba, bassoon, sousaphone. They glow with a dangerous sort of light,
Jul 16, 2011 -
Re: Advertising
Just a side note... the Pro Accounts are really quite nice! I have it, and I have to say that whenever I see YWS with its ads, it kind of ...
Jul 16, 2011
