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Hey Kirby! I saw this on the request a review page (GO TEAM ROCKET!) and I couldn't resist. :) Now, eek! Monologues! These are really difficult to do because you ...

What?! You're not dead, my lady?! Well, at least I am thankful for that! :D Anyway, I really enjoyed this! It was cute and sweet and I loved how your ...

Hey Lady of the Letters! Your avatar is beautiful, by the way. Not quite letters, but definitely a lovely lady! I read through you short story, and it's quite excellent! ...

Hey Allia! :D YES. Girl loses scummy boy and gets much better boy who isn't afraid to be honest and romantic with her. I love it! But then again, I ...

Hi Katarina! :D Okay! So this seemed to be a very philosophical poem that dealt with the topic of existentialism! Or... a poem that was so heartbroken it seemed to ...

Hi SkyeDreamer! :D Okay, so this piece is very cute! Very high school, lol. I have to admit I really like the ending. I mean, you go on and on ...

Hey Tori! :D Okay! Just a couple of thoughts (and hopefully I won't be too rambly or whatever). First of all, your English teacher sounds like no fun, lol. Very ...

If I may be the first to say this, the Isle bit reminded me of Sanctum. XD Anyway! Continuing on... Mayor Gallberg was among the last to arrive. You talked ...

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I have two, but one is for Moth and Myth, so yup! I use the Moth and Myth one most because it directly links in with the FB account I ...

Rawr! Okay, so I did a video critique on it. Yup. Link is here: Anyway, the other comment I have is that there are a lot of words that are ...

Thanks for your help, guys. *has a second question* How can I explain that my character was adopted without telling it outright? You could use sibling tensions to bring this ...

Pfft! I was being perfectly serious in my cynicism, I assure you! This question ("Does religion cause more problems than it solves?") is a loaded question because the question points ...

I figured as much! It definitely seemed like you just scraped it together haphazardly. XD I just wanted to let you know that in university, this would probably be a ...

Ack, I am so excited for you!!! :D Anyway, just a quick typo that I had to point out: because of this small burden we bare.