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Re: Rain or Shine
Allie! I liked your other poem so much that I had to come back! :D Anyway, one thing I think you can do to make this poem that much better ...
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Re: Take Flight
Aww, I really like this poem. It's completely adorable and I love the message it has. I also like the way it rhymes and everything... it sounds like something you ...
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Re: Glass Prison
Hmm... so, correct me if I am wrong (which I can definitely be!) but it seems to me that this is a double suicide (don't fear the reaper?) and they ...
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Re: Jakil
Hahaha, I approve of your dreams! ;) Okay, so this is bizarre and weird and I kind of adore it. Someone I knew once said that the weirdest stories that ...
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Re: Sacrifice
Haha, well, I definitely didn't see that one coming! I don't know... it seems really random, like you weren't really sure of what to put, so you decided to make ...
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Re: [deleted]
Locked. Plagiarism.
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Re: [deleted]
Locked. Plagiarism.
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Re: I do believe in commas. I do, I do.
Oooh, science fiction? :D Well... I kind of love the dystopian fiction. I mean, yeah, they don't have anything to do with science fiction, really, but they have so much ...
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Re: deleted.
Locked because of author's request!
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Re: I Forget My Age.
Ooers! I want to see if I can get this. Well... okay, it's kind of confusing, but I at least want to try! :D It seems like you're talking about ...
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Re: Hey there. I'm... who's that there?
I read Animal Farm when I was eight-years-old... yeah, not really the best age for it now. Whenever I try to read it now, I either throw my book on ...
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Re: Notice me, then love.
Hey summerlovely! :D Okay, so this poem! It was mostly about this guy not noticing you and how you yearned for him, right? That definitely sucks... I hate having to ...
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Re: Literary Journal Cover
Smiley! :D Okay, so this may just be me but... well... this seems more like a murder mystery cover for an anthology than something that would be part of the ...
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Re: Angry
Yeah... I have to agree with Janika here, lol. I know you were very impassioned when you wrote it, but for some reason it seems pretty funny to me because ...
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Re: Ashes and Teeth: The Revision
I know, but you know me. I like to pick apart things to death. Also, I don't doubt that he is powerful... trust me! You do not mess with demons. ...
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