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I don't get it though... where as Satan in the bible, as the fallen most power angel, or did I miss something big? It doesn't seem quite accurate. I mean, ...

Hey flowerchild! :D Okay, so I need to run off to class soon (gack!) but I think the reason why you think the beginning is good and the rest isn't ...

Aw, of course they're normal for you! You're 15-years-old. You're allowed to have minor collapses every once in a while. ;) Now, as far as your poem goes... I think ...

Yay for people understanding you and such! :D Anyway, one of the things that struck me for this poem (and there were several things!) was that it was not really ...

Jasmine! :D Okay, so this is a very colorful picture and I love the blend of colors, plus the plant-like structure there is. Plus, the fonts that you used are ...

Aw, this is adorable! The way your cat is looking at the rose is completely adorable! Plus, the details of your cat's fur, the rose... all of these lend this ...

Yay for answered questions! :D 1. You should definitely write your larger piece then! And, he seems to be a pretty lame demon after all... they're only powerful when they ...

XD You are such a linguist, lol! :D

Maybe pride falling from the heart is a good thing! I find that pride makes us do a lot of stupid things that we, in a more sensible mind, would ...

Wait, aren't you going to answer my questions? ;)

Ooh! I am reading a translation of Beowolf now, by Heaney. My professor says it's one of the best translations out there because it primarily uses English words to express ...

Who needs a shaved kitty when you can have a sphinx kitty? :D Check them out! A kitten: ...okay, so I admit it. They're kind of creepy, but hey! At ...

Aww... a sad poem about unrequited love! :( One thing that I noticed about this poem is that there are a lot of I's in it. I mean, there are ...

Whooooops. I critiqued the wrong one. xD Anyway, now I am on the right one! And yes, it is tons better! Good job editing. :D Also, you're not that bad ...

Hey paulop! :D Okay, so basically the review that silverkey gave you was really, really good and you should follow all the grammar advice she gave you! It's really helpful. ...