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  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm new here

    Ooh, that sounds traumatizing, lol. I think my seven-year-old self would die from shame if I had to introduce myself to my classmates. Not that I wouldn't do it, I ...

    May 31, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Last Moments

    Eli! I am going to bug you about this, because if I don't, who will?! Basically, you need to do spell check and check your grammar. Just glancing over it, ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Characters in my next novel =)

    Uh oh... as a twin myself, I can say with certainty that twins with their heads together are in no way to be trusted! It's just bad news for all. ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Unspeakable

    Hey RileyJ! :D Okay, so I was reading your poem, and I think that it might start off better with these lines: I sat on my porch, unable to bring ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: God Loves You

    I love the first stanza! I was free-writing the other night at an obscenely late hour (and yes, it was an obscenely late hour!) and one of the things that ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Empire Ch. 1

    Haha, yay for boring first chapters mostly about the details? I don't think the blob is necessary at all, except for your own private notes. I mean, it's what we ...

    May 31, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Ashes and Teeth: The Revision

    Hi HaydenSmith! This reminds me of a story I wrote several years back, so I am a bit partial to the topic already! :) Okay... just a couple of things! ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Characters in my next novel =)

    Ooers, I want to see bigger heads of theirs! Nice work here! You can definitely see their personalities with their eyes, especially the girls. The guys mostly look brooding, but ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Dear Paper

    Hahaha! Awwww. This is a story of unrequited love, definitely! Poor paper... it's going to take more than glue to keep them together. I don't know about you, but when ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Literary Journal Covers [WIP]

    Hmm... they look so old that they're probably okay. Copyrights don't last forever, after all! The biggest copyright concern would be if you took that picture from someone else without ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: 1,000 lilies

    Hi HaydenMacaw! :D Hmmm... I'm not sure whether I like this or hate this, so I am leaning towards like at the moment! The thing is, this is very, very ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Literary Journal Covers [WIP]

    Hi Jenthura (again!) And YAY! You've been playing around with fonts and the like! Very good. I approve. :) I still think the book one is a bit too old ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Call of Old Friendship

    Hi PinkPanther! :D Okay, so I gather that this is a poem about you and a friend moving away? How sad! And you're right... it is a bit awkward to ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: I do believe in commas. I do, I do.

    Yeah, I agree! Science fiction that is way too out there is way too out there! But, I was talking with some researchers, and they actually get ideas from science ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Wow.. Just found out

    Congratulations! :D Best of luck for you three!

    May 31, 2011


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