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Hahah! This reminds me of the poems that I used to write! Yeah... I mostly do prose now? Anyway, I have to say that my favorite part about the poem ...

Yay! We love Nano and the opportunities it gives us, right? :D Anyway, this was fun! General impressions? Ambria is an idiot. I don't really like her at all... she ...

Er, this may just be me being dumb, but what exactly is Christianese anyway? I have never heard of it before. I am not quite certain of this... this may ...

Hello! I don't mind depictions of sex or anything, even if they're graphic, but I found this really boring. Maybe that's because I was expecting something much graphic, and this ...

As a sidenote: I am probably going to make Hoas's story a lot more general and vague soon, lol. I'll put the full story later off, when Hoas actually gets ...

Ooers! I expected this to be a bit of a shock since I did jump a bit to something which happens , but I didn't expect it to be this ...

Aspie! I read your name at first as "Auspicious." I guess that's a good sign, right? :D Anyway, welcome! I love fantasy and philosophy too... in fact, my characters often ...

Kelly! :D Okay! So, I agree with Gryphon here... the part in Swift's POV seems a little pointless and when we got to Queenie's point of view, it was rather ...

GryphonFledgling, m'dear! I did say I would get to this, didn't I? :D Anyway, quick is a good word to describe this! It did seem a bit quick... and the ...

Nate knows where to go to avoid people in Yosemite, no worries! ;) Have fun! :)

Iluve is being mean to Solea because Solea burnt her book! As far as Uclepides goes, you'll meet him later on! And yes, he is a he! And I am ...

One more reason why it's good to stop for a bit and restart... rusty or not, this is better than the sorts of things that you've written before. ;) Okay, ...

Blackbird! All right, I liked the story! It was quiet and subtle, it had some great moments of description, I love the focus on the shirt and the mother's reactions ...

Hahaha! This was pretty awesome. I liked your sense of pacing and all the action in the story. In fact, it reads more like an action adventure story than a ...

Rawr! Thanks Nate! :)