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Hahaha! Good question. He probably wrote her something mean because Daddy made him and he didn't want to so he was as awful as possible. He's not really a nice ...

Do you haiku?! Nah, just kidding, obviously you have! :D Okay, so the thing is that you only have a limited amount of syllables in a haiku to pack the ...

DUDE. I lost a shoe the other week... sill can't find it. It's pretty awkward. It's a little black flat and I only lost one of them. In any case, ...

Hi Tangent! :D I love you and your work always, so yay! I love the word play, especially the part where she says she forgets the whether that person is ...

ZOMG, YOU LIKE TO WRITE?! Nah, just kidding! :D As far as what I do? I write when it's fun for me and when I know it won't stress me ...

PSH. She's not old. I hope... XD Anyway, it's nice to see you on! Inspirational writing, eh? That's awesome. :) What sorts of inspirational writing do you do? Do you ...

Dude, you have the best username ever. It's absolutely awesome. XD Anyway! Introductions are always a bit weird. But, maybe you can tell us what you like to write and ...

I think there's something wrong with me mentally because even though the poem held all the clues of being kind of a simple, child-like version of the London Bridge Is ...

Haha, we're never cruel! We just get.... uh... a little over-excited about tearing apart literary works that are posted. XD I'm glad you like this site so far! You're pretty ...

ZOMG! What did you name yourself after?! When I first saw your name, I thought of Jerry Spinelli, an author who I absolutely loved as a kid. Like, he was ...

Haha! I'm a sucker for romance too. Especially the really really soppy romances which are coupled with a predictable action/adventure story. I know... it's usually a bad mix, but I ...

Vampire novels! Zomg. I keep trying to read those, and I keep failing. Maybe it's not my thing? I don't know! I keep trying to read them, but I get ...

ZOMG, it's wisemann210! Nice to see you back in the literary forums. :D You seem to be developing your poetry style! It's nice to see that. :) My main comment ...

Yay! We hope we'll help you improve also. :D And don't worry... introductions are always awkward, lol. But it's all good in the end! Also, I think everybody starts with ...

Aww! Bye! Have a great time scribbling poems in your notebook. Just... don't go crazy like Pink Floyd does in "The Wall." Remember when he says, "I've got a little ...