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Gah! I love how you chose this subject! I mean, so many people choose just flowers or flowers and cute insects, but the very fact that you would choose a ...

Dude! I think I know a poem you will like. It's called, "The Iliad." It's by Homer, and it's completely amazing . It's really, really gory though, so beware! But, ...

Haha! Oh noes, not the crazy iphone spellings! Make sure it doesn't make you say anything really embarrassing... that would be bad! Also, you like Doctor Who? My brother is ...

Yay! I am so happy that you're writing this... especially this! It looks like it was ridiculously fun to write. :) First of all, I found a slight typo! When ...

Okay, this is going to sound reeeeeeeeeeeeally nitpicky, but I am kind of a science nerd, so... well... yeah. :P The idea of a world having no gravity is rather ...

Hey snickerdooly! :D So, this poem is a bit long, and I think you can really trim it down into something and make it a lot stronger as a result. ...

Haha, oh dear. How are you supposed to critique something like this? This is very, very, very dorky. And I kind of adore it for that! Just one thing: Buddy ...

I really, really like what you do, Dynamo! :D For me, I tend to not give enough information about the story, especially in the beginning? It's not necessarily a good ...

What helps me is I focus on stories that I really, really love. If I don't really love to write it, I put it on the shelf and wait a ...

I adore satire! :D I approve of Kyllorac's pick of Saki! I love that storyteller! Mark Twain is always excellent for that sort of stuff. His biblical satire had me ...

Hmm... I'm not so sure. The description is fine upon first glance, but if you stop to think about it, it's a bit confusing. I'm a little confused as to ...

Dia duit, Shamrock! I hope YWS is good for you. :) What sorts of things do you like writing?

Ooers, those are three of my favorite activities that you listed! :D What else do you like to do? Are you a fan of hiking? Are you a dog or ...

Uh oh, one of those flaky writers... we're going to have to beat some discipline in you, aren't we? :D It's great to have you on, Quasi! And, now that ...

Psh! I'm sure there are tons of exciting things about you! In any case, I did read it all. ;) But that's okay! You seem a little weird, so you'll ...