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Dear Diary, Daddy is very tired from yesterday and he has been sleeping all day. Lin gave him a special drink and now he looks very peaceful. Lin told me ...

Edited 4/24/2011 Added link: The Fallacy Files thanks to Cthulhu !

Eek! That sounds so exciting! What's your novel about?

Yay! I love quirky stories! And you'll get some reviews like that, but most of them will be quite to your liking, I am sure. ^^

Hi Mango! Welcome to YWS! :D Also, I second ehte's question... what do you like to write? :D

There are toooooons of people from India here, so yay for that! :D Your story sounds really interesting! Is it following the account that is fake or the person behind ...

Or, we'll watch out for you! :D My advice is write what you love! I kind of adore writing those weird, quirky stories, so I do that and I looooove ...

The plot thickens! :o Okay, so first of all! I think the very last part of this chapter should be Alec and Ridley's conversation, just because the flow seems a ...

Aw, if it makes you feel better, I can't write good music for beans either! Still, you seem to be quite musically inclined. :) Ooers, you know Kylan! This is ...

Ooers, actually I liked this quite a lot! The nameless one is strange and seems like a monster...I've been reading a lot of Greek myths, so I was reminded by ...

Okay, so I said that I would look at this later, but... well... I lied. :P Anyway! So, just general nitpicks! I think something should happen in between the part ...

Hi Dreamwalker! I kind of feel like the next chapter would be a better start of the story. The first few paragraphs were rambling at best. When she said, "But, ...

Hello again! :D I forgot to say this in my last critique, but I suppose I'll say it here! I really do like your writing style. It's very nice and ...

Hi Alex! Interesting set up you have here! I think it's interesting that he can take away souls and remain unseen. At first, I thought it was because he was ...

Wow! These are lovely. I love all the little details and I especially love all the little inventions that you have. It kind of reminds me of a murderous version ...