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Yay! I adore violent poems, so I am glad to see you writing like this. :) My main advice here would make it a lot more violent. Obviously, you have ...

Haha, Stella's kind of an overdramatic idiot at times. XD But Luca is awesome in a rebellious sort of way! Though I imagine that he's going to laugh at Stella ...

Duggie! :D I agree! You are too talented... see if you can get some plain white paper for your drawing notebook! It'll be much better, honest. :) I love the ...

I looked it over and I realized I only found one in past tense. Yay for over-reacting! It's here: “My poem, I could not think of a word that rhymed ...

Navita reminded me of something else! Recent studies in positive psychology by Dr. Robert Emmons (done in UC Davis!) have indicated that feeling grateful (for people and things and circumstances, ...

Jessa and I wrote this to our twins Kayde2 and Griffinkeeper . We love you guys, and you two are definitely our favorite partners in crime! :) This is for ...

JESSA! NO. You are not allowed to put this in the short stories section! You must put it in the novels section, and you will COMPLETE this story or I ...

Hey cupcake! :D I adore rainbows, so I figured I should take a look at this! :) Anyway, one thing I kind of missed was there was no grand climax. ...

This is rather true! It's kind of scary how the media warps our perception of beauty, especially with photoshop and the like! One thing that I would like is more ...

I read this and my heart broke! I'm so sorry this happened! He sounds like vermin and nobody should be exposed to those kinds of people, especially in such intimate ...

Hello! This was a fantastic little short story... I quite liked it! Very cute... and boy, did Lisa get Drew back! One thing I would like to know is what ...

Hello! :D I didn't see the title first, so when I read it, I was like, "OMG, IS SHE TALKING ABOUT HEAVEN? I BET SHE IS." Then I looked up ...

I have a friend who will rap it for you, maybe. Want me to ask him if he'll do it?

Hey there! First of all, you need to spell check this! You don't spell "atheist" or "atheism" right, and while that's a minor point, it makes your argument look a ...

You should get points for writing tips forum and welcome forum too!