Snoink

Hi Azila! :D This part sounds a little off: I want to cool it! I want to cover it with icy fingerprints, to freeze it with my breath! I want ...

She's not actually sitting in the backseat...

I know you wanted me to review one of your poems, but you didn't say which one, and this one is the most recent, so I'll be looking at this ...

I didn't quite like this. Your MC doesn't make sense to me. First of all, he's shipwrecked, and he keeps on making the usual mental contradictions (that was my purpose... ...

Thanks for the link! :D I thought the format was a bit too repetitious... you know, the "When she..." bits. I would like to see those words only used to ...

Duuuuude. Your title is controversial, lol. I took out Griffinkeeper's message, by the way. ^^ The issue has been settled! Sorry for that mess. :) Anyway, one thing I would ...

Uhhh. *high fives* Woooooo! Party with the high fives!

Eh, this didn't do anything for me. I mean, I could see that you were going for the shock value and whatever by making the narrator almost bored and nonchalant ...

The bible has caused much charity work to be done! Not sure if it counts though. I need to finish Spun Yarn... that would be an awesome example. Maybe you ...

Express your undying love for Griffinkeeper here! Anyway: Grif! You are amazing and your willingness to retrieve my pigs, even if you have to break into locked classrooms with security ...

Haha, whenever there is no YWS, you can see the stages of grief happening in its members. It's pretty funny!

Tori! You only go for the raccoon eyes look when you're in college, and it'll be natural then! No use hurrying things up. ;) Amplifier, you and I have the ...

Wow, thanks for all the reviews! I didn't really expect any! :o Granidid was a name I came up when I was eight. And yes, this story is very, very ...

Are you kidding? There are tons more American accents than that! For instance, the Midwest, in general, is pretty funny. And then each of the southern states has a different ...

Um... yeah. This is the first installation! I'm not really looking for critiques in the critically critical nitpicky sense, though general comments on the overall story and typo-spotting is, as ...