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In Corrupt a Wish, the idea is to corrupt someone's wish. Someone wishes and the next person corrupts it. Ex. 1.) I wish I had a million dollars 2.) Granted ...

Woo! This hit 100 pages! :D And, like a phoenix bursting into flames and becoming a new phoenix, so this must be! Check out the new thread:

Hades' wife! You have a lovely poem here. :) I think the best part are the last two stanzas -- especially the last! But the second to last stanza kind ...

This is kind of creepy, lol. I mean, if someone tried to do this to me, he would probably be slapped! I think it would be much better if we ...

Oooooh. I thought you had trouble with the actual posting of it. :D Well, if it feels really forced, you should totally post it up for critique! You might get ...

Hm... I'm not sure if I can join that partner poem thing! I'm a moderator for YWS, so there might be a conflict of interest there. I'll go check, okay? ...

We write silly things! He helps me with my comics sometimes. Other times, he'll help me write radio show scripts, which we perform on YWS! So it's pretty fun. :) ...

Ack, I love this poem in so many ways. The rhythm is lovely, the content is so funny, and the punch line is just hilarious! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I'm totally ...

Haha, I love it. :) The main thing here is you have toooooooooooooons of adverbs, and you use that as an excuse to not use interesting verbs, which is a ...

I have to say... I absolutely adore this poem. XD I mean, I love math and all, don't get me wrong! I learned calculus before I learned how to drive. ...

Ack! Have to point this little typo out: Yes, Freedom is a state of mine

Hi Jessa! Welcome to YWS! It's fun having a twin, no? I actually dragged my twin (Griffinkeeper) on the site too, lol, and we've done some co-writes with each other, ...

Hi misstoria! :D Hm. This poem is interesting. I find it intriguing that you are using flight as a metaphor both for life and of death. It's an interesting concept! ...

Hey Jasmine! :) The thing about this poem was that it wasn't sure what it wanted to be. So it was very unsure sounding! When I think of innocence, I ...

This kind of reminds me of "Naming of Parts" by Henry Reed, except not nearly as powerful. For one, you kind of stall at the very end and seem to ...