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Ooh, interesting. It kind of reminds me of the Song of Songs by Solomon since it's a collection of poems that go back and forth on love and loss and ...

Ack, please calm down, everyone. There isn't a hard and fast answer to this question, so it's silly to call one side ignorant when all of us are ignorant of ...

Hi Yurii! So, since the contest is officially closed, I am reviewing the entries that were posted on the literary forums. The thing about this story is that it's not ...

Hi! Just a couple of things... “No kidding. My mother was a dragon and she kinda did that as a part time job before she had me.” The knight said. ...

Hi Kyllorac! Hmm... it seems like you were going for the bad writing without actually putting a story in here. Not sure why you did this, lol. In any case, ...

Ooers, another fairy tale! I adore those. I think you were wrong in your refusal to add more detail... you have an interesting story beginning, but then it kind of ...

Hey Tangent! Did I mention that you were awesome? Because you are! Now, for your poem, I kind of adored the "My sister hasn’t spoken to me" stanza because it ...

Hey Smiley! So I guess I was a bit vague in my first critique! Here's a video critique, which I am hoping is a lot more thorough than the previous ...

Hey Smiley! :D Lovely poem! I like the positive aspects to it and everything... mommies deserve tons of love! :) One thing that you might consider doing is cleaning up ...

Hey Jennya! Thanks for commenting on my poem. :D And thanks for explaining some of the Australian lingo! I wouldn't have known it otherwise, being in America and all. For ...

Sci fi! It got me to where I am now, doing awesome science things! :D

Didn't you hear? That little girl that you knew who would nuzzle her head into your neck and give you little butterfly kisses along your cheeks? That girl who painted ...

Hey Mikko! :D It seems more like a summary of what you want to write instead of a story. I would keep this as a summary of what you're going ...

Hey disco! :D Okay, so the typos are absolutely killlllling your poem. So you need to take them out! And you also love to use pronouns, but you don't introduce ...

Pfft! I hope it's not a novel! I do have to judge the bad writing. xD So the madness begins! :D And it's Einstein! Einstein! *twitches*