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Hey Blink, you didn't answer the next question... what is your definition of human? Because one can and one has argued that civilization has only really occurred when humans can ...

Stella! And... Stella writing?! OMNOMNOM. Anyway! I'm not sure if this is me misreading things due to sleep deprivation or whatever, but... are these people she's seeing not real? Because ...

I miss Grandma Rose too. :( One request... can you tell us more stories about what she did with you, personally? I don't know... I love these sorts of bittersweet ...

When my characters swear, I usually have it go, "He swore and punched the nearest wall." Or something like that. If it's important, I'll let them swear. If it's ridiculous, ...

Blink, Quite the opposite; society preceded organised religion, which naturally came to absorb the best of society’s moral codes. What makes religion such a problem is, as I’ve said many ...

Hi Ani! Welcome to YWS! If you need any help, you can always bug me and I'll do my best to help you. :) What sort of things do you ...

Just a quick note! Don't worry too much about putting it in manuscript format. Nowadays, publishers like it when you use the automatic formatting that Word has. The days when ...

Oooh, I do like this! I would like to see it a bit longer, but only because it's rather fantastic! I love your word choice and your imagery. The rhyming ...

It looks like an excellent introduction! The last line does stick out a bit and sounds a bit cheesy, however that's only because the build up is so good so ...

These are fantastic! Though I have to admit, I like your colored shots better. The black and white one is a bit too dull. The colored ones have the right ...

It varies depending on your word count! The longer your story is, the less people will comment, generally. For this forum, you should only ask about three people to review. ...

Carbon dioxide rises from the flickerings of a dying flame

Pat Buchanan! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE! I LOVE YOU FOREVER!!!!!! DON'T LEAVE ME!

NO. The use of Mozart's Clarinet Concerto automatically makes the music 10/10. Maybe 11/10. I'm sorry, we must agree to disagree in this particular point. And yeah. This was an ...

Personally, I think ideas in general are dangerous and thus bad. Especially the biggest ones, as is the case for religion, but also the case for the patriotism, politics, conspiracy ...