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Hi EternityRain! Interesting story. :) Nice characters too! A couple of thoughts! I think you shouldn't start off with talking about how she is an orphan, because clearly she is ...

Ooh, that sounds great! Can't wait to see your new picture! :)

Eek! Don't worry! Non-Euclidean geometry is a very special geometry. That doesn't mean that Euclidean geometry doesn't work though! However, Euclidean geometry holds several assumptions, like parallel

Yay for Juliann coming to stay! :D As far as your poem goes? I think it would be super neat if you could talk about her kicking butt. Right now, ...

Ack! Tangent (and yes, it's really you!) these are soooooo good. I love them. I love how they build off each other, I love how they are haikus but so ...

Hi Matthews! :D First of all, your title seems to have an identity crisis! Is it Soiled Vows or Broken Vows? Now, for the rest of the poem! It seems ...

Yay! It's a little too blunt! I would probably trim it just a bit. Something like... her spine bloomed from her curved back like a mountain, of Emaciation Co. with ...

Oooh! Yummy! A poem! :D First, a typo! Too something about money and greed, how very apt

Ahhh! You know the way to my heart... multi-variable ecomonics calculus class? THAT IS SO COOL. Anyway! Keep you as constant;

Hi Kiicoh! :D Okay! So this critique is going to sound extremely nitpicky, but that's only because I really like the concept of your poem. :) Now! The first thing ...

Hey fruity! :D Eek! A cutting poem. That makes me sad. :( Hopefully, you're less pissed off now! As far as the poem goes! I like using pain in poems, ...

Gah! I love this! The humor is funny, I loooooove the characters, and the drawing is pretty fantastic! Though... um... I have to admit, I kind of have a crush ...

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I like them!

Yay! Rosaries! :D They're beautiful things. :) For this, I probably would make Jesus the focal point and not the written words. Also, I am curious... what's on the other ...