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Re: Love
Hi BlackDahlia! :D First of all, you don't need to have the quotes... really! The neat thing about poetry is that narrations don't really need quotes. It's rather different from ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Died for love...
Hi Demoness! :D One thing that I was wondering about when I read this... you said that they died for love, but I really couldn't see any love in this ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Illusion
Hello! :D For one, I really liked the uncapitalized style. If you did it any other why, I think it would look too annoying! At least for me. If it ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: Some Upcoming Changes
The only thing I am sad about is the poetry and short story database. I spent sooooo many hours on that! But yeah, the other stuff sounds cool.
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: Who is the Google Adsense bot writing to?
Can I add him to my friends list? XD He's a loner. :P
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Who is the Google Adsense bot writing to?
HE'LL CHEAT ON YOU LIKE HE CHEATED ON ME. :(
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Who is the Google Adsense bot writing to?
He's a nice guy kay? D': You aren't saying... D:
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Daytura in Wonderland
Hey watch! You wanted me to look at this, so here I am! :D I looked at the small bottle of pills next to me and felt an icy shiver ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Who is the Google Adsense bot writing to?
I KNEW IT.
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: HI BOTS!
They are little spiders who crawl around the web and TEAR OUT YOUR EYES.
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Life [Prologue]
Dun dun dun! I think I almost wrote a story like this a while ago. But, I was lazy and didn't want to start it. So I'm glad that the ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Hi everyone
¡Hola! I saw you in chat... and then I found your poem! So wooo! I commented on it too. I thought you were more of in the Russian area, so ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] Alone in the Crowd
Hey Pigeon! :D First of all, I would totally rearrange your poem to look like this! Walking down forty-second street There are a thousand, thousand feet; All of them marching ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Heaven's Gate
Hey Patrick! :D One thing I would like to see is a little bit more... conflict, if that makes sense. You kind of have the conflict set in the middle. ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Matryoshka
Eek! Love the idea with the Matryoshka doll. :) First of all! It comes seeking it's reflection
Sep 18, 2010
