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Hi Emilie! You've gotten a lot of advice so far, so I hope I'm not repeating the other comments! I haven't read the previous comments, so I probably am. Sorry ...

They're taking revenge on all the times you stalk me!

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Okay, so I'm not finished yet, but I think I know why Fanny drives me nuts. It's the way she's perceived by people. I mean, yeah, she's terrified and she's ...

Hi Sarah! How do you do? :) I think the best way to learn how to write is to just write and don't be afraid to suck at it. But, ...

Woo! You have a nice poem! One thing that I might suggest, if you're looking to improve this poem still, is that you should switch the first stanza (you are ...

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For writing fiction... write what you love! Everything else will follow. And... um... about the website? There's a lot to say! But, basically, if you need any help, you can ...

Woo! I get to read an edited story! This is awesome. :) I guess this means that I should talk about the story, eh? ;) First of all! I think ...

Hey Cassie! I promised you a critique and, well, here I am! :D First of all! Very exciting stuff going on here! You have mad people attacking these characters... maybe ...

Well. Okay. I am about halfway through (a little more), and I no longer want to stab out Fanny's eyeballs. I still think feeding her to the sharks would be ...

Teehee! This is kind of cute. :D One thing that I think would make this really good is if you told us what kind of movie she is going to. ...

Hey ilove! Okay, so I've been reading a LOT of romantic fiction novels lately, and this definitely reminded me of them, so yay! Now, this seemed like the ending of ...

Teehee, you guys are crazy. *Sweenie* "Order, order!" a particularly harried gryphon called out, pounding his talon into a nearby tree stump. The sound that he produced was less than ...

Okay. So, I was reading this. I'm not done with it... I only got a quarter through, but I am not really happy with it. The characters are complete losers ...