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Re: I Suck At Poetry
The best way to make a poem unique is to put yourself into it. Let it sparkle with your personality. If you have trouble with doing this, try writing about ...
Sep 15, 2010 -
Re: Sparkling
Hey Jon! The comment in capital letters is probably the most important one, but I felt bad for only giving out one comment, so here's a full critique. :P As ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Rolling Stones vs. The Beatles
I like The Beatles better. ^^
Sep 8, 2010 -
Re: The Twin Terror: A Storybook Created by Snoink and Grif - DT
Here's a convo. Nothing's set in stone... we're just excited and talking about the possibilities. Welcome! You have entered [The Lounge] at 12:36 am [Nutty] 12:36 am: Hey snoink [Griffinkeeper] ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: The Twin Terror: A Storybook Created by Snoink and Grif - DT
This is our DT thread! Wooo!
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Hey...
thts nce ill b sre 2 tlk w/ u. ...sorry, I couldn't help myself. ^^
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Aimée (3)
Haha! I knew she was evil from the get-go! She didn't fool me, oh no she didn't! I think this is probably my favorite chapter so far, if only because ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Aimée (2)
Wait, are you saying that Americans are considered to be happy-go-lucky people? That's pretty hilarious! I always thought we were considered assholes by other countries... probably because of our stub
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: The Twin Terror: A Storybook Created by Snoink and Grif
*Sweenie* There were two rules for the my eyrie. 1) Don't get involved with humans. 2) If you do get involved with humans, knock them out and fly away. Let ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: The Twin Terror: A Storybook Created by Snoink and Grif
Dude, don't diss the emo teenagers. We can totally make a story from that.
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: The Twin Terror: A Storybook Created by Snoink and Grif
Very well then. I am a gryphon character... female and the fraternal twin of YOUR gryphon character you will inevitably create. We don't know we are twins though, so that's ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Always Trust In Tomorrow
I do like the idea of running into the forest and just talking and be accepted as who you are. It's a very beautiful idea. :) One thing I might ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: A Cautionary Tale... (Info-dumping)
Griffypoo! Just one thing about your edit: In luctus pellentesque imperdiet. Aliquam arcu nisi, feugiat in interdum sed, sollicitudin in magna." I would replace the period with a double hyphen. ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Aimée (2)
Hmmm... I think I would really like to see a bit more conflict in this. Like, they pull over waaaaaaay too easily. An American family, pull over? Psh! Maybe they ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Aimée
First of all! I have never known a forest to be brightly lit. So you may want to change that! Second of all, HOLY CRAP. That was intense! I mainly ...
Sep 7, 2010
