Snoink

First of all, your title is incredibly awesome. It's catchy and interesting and makes you do a double-take...completely awesome! Now, your poem! I love how it's narrated by a sneaky ...

Hahaha, I hate your character for the simple fact that she has all these interviews. XD You may want to change the line about her curing cancer... it's unrealistic, given ...

This is five kinds of awesome. I loved reading it -- out loud, of course. ;) My only nit-pick is that some of the things would probably not be said, ...

In "Airplane!", the inflatable co-pilot? Yep. FREAKED ME OUT. I think I was four or something when I first saw it. I started crying when I saw him. It was ...

*Locked*

Hey Dots! Okay, so you said you liked harsh edits? Hopefully I'm not too harsh! I got this far before I became disinterested in the story: Ring, Ring. I grabbed ...

You have to do a bit of critical thinking when you reevaluate your work, yes. Some comments you'll listen to, others you'll disregard. But thinking has never been a bad ...

Proving, once again, that California is awesome.

Now you don't know they're zombies, really. The imagery isn't really as evocative of it now, since it doesn't use the typical cliches associated with zombies. Also, the second line ...

Maybe something with a little more... gory glory? I keep on thinking of awful things, like "half-eaten leg" or something else similarly disgusting, because I'm a terrible person. XD Now ...

It was the man’s gesture that alerted Dhananad’s eye to the intent of their visit. Just before the man came in, he shook his snow off his coat, brushed the ...

Yay! Better! :D This is completely nit-picky, but I had a problem with this: Dragging their dead limbs behind, They're coming for me. Too much of the same sound! So, ...

Yeah, but we all know you're in a different dimension where time has no meaning.

*Moved to Novels section, at author's request*

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