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LIAR! It says 7949! YOU LIE.

Well, many of the people in Nevada are absolutely against Harry Reid... I say this having been to Nevada and having relatives living there! There is a large amount of ...

Hey jDawn! You did a couple of grammar mistakes, so I'm just going to point them out really quickly! :) The rabbit turned it's vibrant blue eyes on me, a ...

OM NOM NOM. More story! Hmmm... for some reason, I really don't like Mona. I mean, she just doesn't act realistic, at least to me. Maybe it's because Californians are ...

I think the Tea Party, like it or not, is really going to influence this election. The Republicans kind of dismissed it at first, and then later somewhat embraced it ...

Hey Isha! We don't understand what a Forgotten is until too long. I think you should introduce Bailey bumping into her author or something of the sort. That might be ...

Yayyyyy!

Hey Sachi! The death scene sounds really strange and random right now. I don't think I really like it. I think you should either expand or get rid of it. ...

Haha, I kind of adore the description of the character with the scar crinkling when he smiles. That's awesome. It's not so much as the description that I adore, it's ...

I love this story so much. XD Also! It looked really fun to edit. Really fun. So I edited, using Track Changes, of course. What I did, mainly was reformat ...

I always look at tip 101 and wonder if Nate wrote that because of me, aside from the getting-away-with-it part. xD He totally did. ;)

Dude, your title rocks so hard that it's amazing. Anyway, for the first five stanzas, I thought it sounded too much like a cheerleader. Not that sounding like a cheerleader ...

Are you talking about the interface of the actual coding program or...?

The reason why the ending is a bit weird is because you made it go from slightly boring to extremely jarring. And the jarringness of the last line (a very ...

I know what I've been missing all my life! More of Sachi's writing! This was loverly! Very touching and wonderful. My main point against this piece is there isn't enough ...