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Nathalie! Yay! We have a resident Finnish person here, but I don't recall us having a Dutch person. Anyway, welcome very much! I've heard much about the Netherlands, and it ...

Hey Aiden! This seems more like a monologue than a story. Or maybe a love letter of sorts by a spurned lover who has nothing to lose, but again not ...

Race was actually made up to classify blacks as inhuman, actually. The scientific categories were not a part of that. Just sayin'. :) They've come to mean something else.. but ...

OMG, a new poem by wisemann210?! :o So, I liked this for the most part! The first three lines are full of awesome. It's the last two lines that looked ...

Hey, smashles! :D A very catchy tune! I imagine it as a kind of poppy song. The repetition totally works for it too, which is completely awesome. One thing that ...

So! I don't know if you're still interested in this poem or not, but since I bugged you, I figured I would give you a critique. :) This was an ...

Hey, hobbit! I'm not sure... one of the bad parts about putting a blog into poetry is that blogs are essentially passionate rants that don't necessarily make sense... and when ...

The tunnel lights turned green and Grif thought of the horizon. What exactly do you mean by this? The Gryphon's thrusters fired This is sooooo dirty. "Let's get out of ...

Your title is fantastic! It was the thing that drew me into reading this. :) Now, let's talk about the evil stepmother, right? She is obviously very evil. She is ...

Okay, now that official stuff is done! I don't think we have a lot of comic book artists here. Sad, but true! In any case, it seems from the little ...

*moved to Writer's Corner*

Hey jemjive! This seems more like an explanation rather than a story. You have the initial conflict -- the children going to school and how it affects the tribe! And ...

“Oh, you want to get out? I don’t think that’s possible right now, Stephanie, but I can take this tape off your mouth. Would you like that?” The rest of ...

Hey OneSun! One thing I really think you can do with this poem is to describe Black more. At first I thought it was a person, then I thought it ...

It's in the literary journals too! Very awesome! :)