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Make up is too expensive! D: But! I do have chapstick. It's huckleberry flavor!

James Joyce. D:

I bummed around in California and Nevada. So basically, I went to the mountains and the beach and the farmlands and the desert... I'm going to see if we can ...

*browses through teh worst book ever* He really should have stopped by at YWS first. It's an interesting concept! But too many...irrelevant eyeballs, I think. XD

*Moved to Dramatic Poetry!*

I actually think that reading is the best thing here... but make sure you read a lot. That way, it all melds together after a while. ;)

HOLY CRAP. NOOOO. NOT PURPLE LIPS! GAH! *MASSIVEFLAIL* What a horrible cliffhanger! I hope you post the next thing soon. This is awful! What if our lovely heroine gets hurt? ...

That hat is epic. Especially the sticker on the back.

Hey jemjive! First of all, you may want to change the beginning a little! The description of how she looked seemed too long and unnecessary. Yes, she's attractive. For Jake, ...

This is lovely. I can understand what the voice is calling; "Thief! Thief!". Period isn't needed. I breathe the musty odour of knowledge The phrase "of knowledge" seems a bit ...

Aha! You had it happen to you too! :D When I was fourteen, I used to craft the most amazing stories ever... stories that I loved and really thought were ...

When you change it so that the text is on a plain background, you just change the HTML color right? Because I've been trying and I always come up with ...

Hey seana! This kind of looks like you wrote it really late at night! There are lots of typos, repeated words, misplaced apostrophes, strange punctuation... you name it and it's ...

Hey Mary! You need to focus on the conflict more. The scenery and her hair, etc., is all fine and good, but it clutters up the beginning with what's really ...

Hey ariberry! :D First of all, I found a typo! I knock on your door, cousious.