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Stelllllllla! I like this fairy tale rewrite! It's fun. :) Two things: 1. It seems unlikely that the witch would lock her daughter with Rapunzel. Maybe a reason for this? ...

Only six continents? PSH. We really need to teach penguins how to type...

I'm about to graduate with a biochemical engineering degree. Sooo... kind of biased. An engineer writing sci fi? That's kind of awesome right there!

Woo! Environmental engineering is fun! Not as fun, of course, as some engineering (I may possibly be biased, lol) but still! Welcome to YWS! :) What sorts of stuff do ...

Oh, and I have a question. You know this EE guy, yeah? When he writes his stuff, is he often drunk? :) YES. HE WAS. Anyway, you copied the weird ...

Haha! Teachers can try to kill you with all the school work, can't they? :) I think it's awesome that you started writing through reading. What kinds of stories do ...

Hey desire! You seem very vivacious... it's a good thing you're here! :) You'll be happy to know that we have a section open for art as well as writing. ...

Becca! It's good to have you here! :) I'm one of those ever-elusive people in green that people keep talking about, so if you need any help, just bug me. ...

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Hey Flower! :D Eek! It sucks having friends who want to commit suicide... trust me, I know. And it's absolutely terrifying to try to talk them out of it. On ...

I knew what you were writing about. It was just poorly executed. :P Specific advice? 1. Kill the adjectives. Your poem pretty much relies on those things to get any ...

Please keep comments considerate! :) I don't quite like this. You're using Christian imagery to evoke an erotic nature except... there is nothing Christian about this. Which makes it really ...

Gah! I love the beginning so much that it hurts. If I read the beginning from the bookstore, I would totally get it. Totally. This is awesome. This is where ...

Woo! I love it when people use these little nursery rhymes o their advantage in literature! It's always awesome... always! :D Anyway, just one thought... if the little girl is ...

And he was dead. His body lay face up in the mud, his eyes wide, and his legs splayed. He looked surprised and, if it weren't for the deep wound ...