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Tell me why, Ain't nothin' but a heartbreak, Tell me why, Ain't nothin' but a mistake, Tell me why, I never wanna hear you say, I want it that way! ...

JACK IS AMAZING. Enough said.

Jack will probably hate me for this, but there should only be four red stars at 1150, not five. :P

Very nice hook! You are quite the writer now, aren't you? ;) I think Viviel is right... this does seem too short! Also, I think that he falls in love ...

Hey Sakura! This seemed to be less of a poem and more of a collection of proverbs or cliches. Not that proverbs or cliches are a bad thing (they aren't) ...

Awwww... a cute love story! I would probably get rid of the first paragraph... I like to be dumped into stories, so I would rather be sucked in with the ...

Hey emalily! I kind of like this! :D I can see it sung in a kind of country rock song by a female singer with powerful chops, which makes me ...

Hey Atticus! The repetition kind of bugs me. Like, for t he most part, it looks like you copied and pasted most of it for the last part, with minor ...

PSH. Zoe is such an idiot for not going with the obvious choice... which is Big Bird. Elmo is such a whiny little pot head. He thinks that Bert is ...

Hey Wariofart! This kind of reminded me of 2ge+her! If you haven't heard their music, check them out. They were a boy band when boy bands were cool... and they ...

Hey blackbird! Nice poem, overall! I liked the way that you drew this up. The one thing that I think might make this better is if you went more in ...

Hahaha, this is funny! I loved the first one, thought the third one was the gross, and kind of had a love/hate relationship with the second one. I love it ...

Hey Thane! :D I think I would be more interested in seeing you talk more of what your sick and twisted dreams are. You kind of go into it, with ...

Hey Kyllorac! Mark Twain once said this, "The difference between the almost right word & the right word is really a large matter--it's the difference between the lightning bug and ...

Hey jolene! :D First of all, I don't think this is a prologue! A prologue is more like a chapter. What I think you want to know is if this ...