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Hey Brooklyn! :D I kind of want to read the sequel where the guy would be totally suspended for inappropriate conduct, lol. Anyway, I find it highly unlikely that she ...

this poem is akin to stop and go traffic. I cannot tell you how difficult reading this poem is because I keep feeling like I'm jerked around so that the ...

I don't think bread knives are that good for killing people, actually. :P That aside! I think you can shorten the five stanzas that you have currently to something else ...

Hi silented! I think I would get rid of the first and fourth stanzas. They're just too cliched! Even if you removed on of t hem, the other one would ...

Actually, we like to follow an 18:1 ratio. ;) Nah, just kidding! Nice to see you here! If you need any help with writing reviews, I'm a reviewing monster and ...

Haha, this is a cute poem. :) I want to write a poem here

Hey sillyducky! Right now, this seems more like a blog than a poem, if that makes sense. Like, you have all your thoughts down and you're trying to make sense ...

What color star is next? xD Twelve more critiques and you'll find out! :D

Oy, you don't have to quote everybody's critique. A nice thank you PM or a post on our walls or a gift would be good enough. :) Anyway, for the ...

LOL! What a boisterous rake, eh? :) I'm already writing your elegies.

Hey ratdragoon! :) I have to admit... I'm kind of a sucker for science poems too. This poem kind of reminded me of the Learned Astronomer... I think that's the ...

Eh... it's very... cheesy? I would like to see less COLOR (stanza full of facts) and more poetry. Right now it seems more like an instruction manual than a poem, ...

Hey iamjemo! :D I think you need to have more concrete things in this poem. Most of this poem contains almost completely abstract concepts, such as bonds, circumstance, adventures, home, ...

Hey aidyl, nice story! I do like the characterization a lot... Viya has just the right amount of sass and I love how she handles the guy. The comb is ...

I'm not actually done today. I have to do about 24 more, according to my calculations.