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Hey jemjive! :D First of all, a couple of nitpicks! Do you know the feel?

Teehee! I love stories that are based on dreams... they're so crazy! :o Okay! So a few general comments, which hopefully will be useful! ^^ First of all! I think ...

Dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnn! :o This sounds like a good writer's starter... that is, you know how you sometimes need to have motivation to write so you write something cheesy, yet ...

Awww! This is adorable. I'm sure your friend will love it. Just one thing! I may not be able to ease your aching heart Or the ability to take your ...

In chat! You were new and very confused, lol. I was afraid you would run away. ^^

Eek! Definitely better! A couple more thoughts: - Describe Creepy Carl! What exactly makes him creepy? - Next, this does NOT seem like a college-kids story. Sorry. They seem more ...

What a downer! I don't think you should kill Leander. I think you should revise that Greek myth... in any case, it seems to end too fast! You need to ...

*Moved to Romantic Novels*

*Moved to Romantic Novels*

Gah! Write faster, lol. The suspense is killing me! D: Part of me wants to say that you can spend more time talking about each of the preparations. For instance, ...

Eek! You're back! :D

Links from blogs don't work yet! :o

This will probably be fixed in the profile update, but I just wanted to let you know that my profile isn't showing anything that isn't in the novel forum.

^ I was going to critique this after finals (AHH! Only a couple more days!) but you can do it now! :)

Woooooo! Okay, so this was the most boring chapter of them so far. :P Instead of having her think to herself, what if she thought aloud and Roxy kept interrupting ...