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Re: Sleep-reading
I think your eyes have to be open to read. Unless, of course, you're listening to a book on tape! But yeah. Otherwise, I would have learned a lot more ...
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Re: Leander's Story Pt. 2
Haha, that's true! Another thing you can do... when she's not scared shitless (like... you know... when Hero kind of attacks her) she can be thinking, "What if I don't ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: Leander's Story pt. 3
Okay! This is going to be a quick nit-picky thing, but this is set in the future, and quite honestly, e-mail is not going to be the means of communication ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: Leander's Story Pt. 2
Hahaha, at first I thought this was going to turn into a ghost story... but this is even better! I love Hero, lol. He's awesome. Of course, Leander's kind of ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: Hi nice to meet you.
Hahaha, my dad is in love with trance. I have a sci fi too! It doesn't have any robots or aliens in it... just weird biotechnology gone wrong. I think ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: I'm Steph, who are you?
Hi Steph! Those sound like excellent majors. :D I'm a biochemical engineering major myself, so who knows! Maybe we'll be working with each other someday. :) Nice to see you ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: My name is silent pages... You killed my father... ;)
Wheeeee! I read (and critiqued!) one of your stories already! So woot! Hm. So, we should avoid making you queen, eh? *Discretely takes down, "silent pages for Empress of the ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: Salve!
OMG, AMAZING! I WANT TO READ MORE! Nah, just kidding! Welcome to YWS! I think I critiqued something of yours, but um... it was almost two o'clock in the morning ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: Hello - read it,or the evil unicorns will eat you
Noooooo! Not the evil unicorns! Welcome! And! I thought it was a known fact that Canadians rode on MOOSE (Meese? Mooses?) and not polar bears. :P
May 31, 2010 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
For calling in last radio show!
May 31, 2010 -
Re: Word pallandrome
Hahaha, very clever, FlyerS! I don't think it quite works as poetry (it's a bit awkward and stilted, really), so it's definitely not the greatest poem out there, but I ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: Blooming in May; act I
Hey Kook! It's not everyday that you find a musical on YWS! :D So! 1. Make the lyrics longer! This is obviously a musical, so you want to make the ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: A last dance in darkness
Hey BlanchKe! :D This piece is very weird! I really like the prologue... the narrator is kind of in your face about the whole death thing and the fact that ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: The Dragon War
Hey Jarred! I know this probably isn't fun to write, but I'm curious about Aeron's and Maddie's relationship! What's going on there? You don't have to be totally explicit, but ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: The Dragon War
Hey Jarred! When you posted Chapters 5 and 6, you put chapter 7 there as well! So there is a repeat chapter here! :) Now, the funeral! It seems unlikely ...
May 31, 2010
