Snoink

Hey Darkangel! :D So! I think you rushed this a bit too much and that's why you're not satisfied with it. I mean, you meet the guy, you meet Jennifer, ...

Hey Lava! The nose is really piggy! I don't know whether this is supposed to be the case or what, but it looks like she doesn't really have any nose ...

Wow, I love how you did the hair! A couple of little things... she doesn't really have a nose and the smile, coupled with the wide eyes, looks a bit ...

It does look like fractal art, lol! Still, I gotta love the math joke. ;) I really like the tears in the middle, but the best of it is kind ...

Eek! I love super human stories! You're a good writer too, which makes it even better! :D First of all, modly stuff! That is, I'm a mod. I rated it ...

And I've been working to get a blue. Waah. D= Sixteen more left! :o

OHNOES! CAN YOU UNBAN ME, NATE?

Hello Veeren! Here's to lifelong learning! How did you find this site? :)

I thought this was quick... maybe a bit too quick! I would like you to describe the SPEW Snoink more... it's quite a pleasant place, actually. And I would definitely ...

Hahaha... yeah, it can get a bit confusing, especially with all the letters in there! Do you have a specific example I can use? Maybe that will help. :)

Basically? You have to change: y = ax^2 + bx + c into the form: y = a(x - h)^2 + k To make this slightly more manageable, let's do ...

*flails in awesomeitude, if that is really a word* This is going to be neat to listen to! Our moderating staff has good music choices. Especially JabberHut! Really... Cruella d'Ville? ...

Hey Faded! First of all, I think you have a couple of typos in here! You repeat "rejiment" several times, but I think it should be "regiment." And then you ...

Hey Dalliance! Welcome to YWS! :D A very quick work that you've done, so this is going to be a very quick critique. ;) The main thing is that the ...

Mysteries = awesome. I think, however, that I would like less contradictions and more conflict... just dive into the plot! I think it'll be a much better hook than this, ...