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Re: Santa Claus is Coming to YWS!
Sometimes I wonder whether Pat Buchanan even knows of the hilarity that ensues in his name on this site.
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Black Hole
Hey KittyKat! :D This is just me, but I would really like to see you describe the black hole. I'm kind of a science geek, so I would really love ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Santa Claus is Coming to YWS!
I sense a conspiracy in the making...Are you Nate in disguise? Nope.
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
Oh my, Ari... You are fabulous. :D Me like. Fishr mistook Teague as Ari... a compliment in itself! :)
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Imagine
Hey GoldenQuill! This might just be me, but you have a lot of imagining, but nothing really else. Which is kind of weird! I'm trained to be an engineer, so ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Soul Mate
Hey Demoness! First of all, I found this very repetitious. But I think that was your intention. Still, I didn't quite find your imagery really grabbing... you talked about the ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
That hat is awesome... and that snake bracelet is also awesome. *flails*
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Horror Of God
Hey Risfel! First, a grammatical comment! You do what I do! You skip words. For instance: "Now go forth....and let them [ahh, where's the verb????] that you are my horror ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Gotta write a play!
Okay! So, I wrote a radio script. Not exactly a play, but whatever. Anyway, a page (correctly formatted) is generally one minute, if it's straight dialogue. If it's NOT straight ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: The Dragon.
Why would he indeed! If I were a dragon, I would only eat her if I had a large quantity of teriyaki sauce. Yum! Anyway, first of all, you need ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Pigs Love Mud
Aww, and I really wanted to look at this poem too! :) Aristotle, we don't allow uploads of powerpoints and we won't see powerpoints either! Try converting it to PDF. ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Always Think
Teehee, yes, but what does that mean, if it doesn't mean anything? ;) Anyway, you're repeating the same structure again and again in your short couplets! This is good... if ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: This is a spring morning
Hey Arahnia! This is a beautiful, still poem! And by still, I mean the synonym for quiet, not anything weird. It's pretty! I love how you begin with those first ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Poof -- to Sare
Hahaha, what a great name for such a cat! He looks rather upset... like someone forgot to put a dryer sheet in when he was put in the dryer. XD ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Obvious
Hey icanbefixed! :D Okay! I love your description of the silly boy who can make the narrator smile and laugh, and yet is completely oblivious to the obvious! I think ...
May 20, 2010
