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*moved to The Lounge*

Hey TheThing! This is a very stilted poem. That's fine and all, but really, I was hoping for more drama. You have a very square kind of narrator who seems ...

Hey Ryan! I have to admit, I really like this poem. You obviously spent a lot of time crafting it and it shows. It rolls off easily from the tongue ...

Hey curiousvampire! I'm not an artist at all, but I just wanted to say that I adored this. From the cheeky look the mermaid has to the desperate look the ...

Hey Kanade! :D Hmm... I like the lines, but they seem a little disjointed as they are together! I would probably reorder the sequence of the poem to: I had ...

Hey Kanade! Lovely poem. I love the sensory images that you had... the chamomile, the flower petals... it brings a softness to the poem which is very lovely and sensual. ...

You guys should really stop nominating the same people over and over and over again, Just because they're your best friend, doesn't make them the perfect member. This is good ...

Yes... I am kind of addicted... I want to get a hundred critiques for each category. >.>

LOTR, Lawrence of Arabia, Paprika, anything by Vangelis, and Gladiator. I especially love Gladiator.

Because! It's the reveal of the completely evil plan! :D

I make it my mission in life to change every "utilize" into "use" as far as scientific writing goes. :)

Wheee! Awesome! And watch out... I think at a certain part, all of us are either crying or trying not to cry. XD

Oh, oh oh! I want to film this. Really, really badly. It's just like - WHERE THE HECK IS MY STORYBOARDING PAPER?!?! *cough*cough* Ignore that. But, this is awesome. Compleatly ...

Teehee. I like this chapter the best. It feels like everything's starting to come together. The only problem is you would have to fit it in somehow. You might be ...