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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Polishing Love

    Hey bookgeek! First of all, these girls seem really, really immature. I thought they were in high school, but they're not! So it's a bit weird. Also! Why does she ...

    May 7, 2010
  • General Articles Re: All because of a boy. . .

    Hey Layla! First of all, I boosted this to a 16+ because of the f-word in it. ;) So, this was a really good piece! I'm glad it's a happy ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: random absurd story

    Wait! This seems incomplete! He covers his ears and then the wolves are knocked cold... and then what??? Does Mr. Car A. Rot do anything more? Does he kill them? ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: A Social Experiment- Read this first

    This doesn't prove gender preferences as much as it displays whether you like Depp or Knightley. Just sayin', yo. Not very well broad. :P

    May 7, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Limericks of the Cullens

    Hey ultraviolet! :D These were some really cute poems! I always liked limericks... they're so bouncy and playful. :) Anyway, Renesmee's limerick was the best by far. The other two ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: scary artwork

    Maki! This is really freaky! The main comment is that the syringe looks out of place because it's so orderly looking when everything else is very abstract, blood-soaked, and grotesque ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: vomitspit

    LOL. It was the order that threw me off... girls don't generally order that quantity of food. I mean, I'm sure some do, but you have that whole weight and ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Clothes

    Hahaha, actually, it's a senryu, which is a humorous haiku! Or something like that. Also, this is a pretty old poem! I'm going to lock it so that more people ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Untitled... For now...

    Yay! A historical play! That's what Shakespeare wrote for the most part, you know? ;) Anyway, as far as this play goes, I think I want more. Your story is ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: vomitspit

    What would be more poetic, actually, is you throwing everything away except for the last stanza. So you would cut all the fat and go straight to the main part ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Questions and Answers Re: Is there a way anyone can change their display name...

    Yes! There is a way! But it's a bit of a hassle in several ways. We don't actually want users to change their names because it can change the code ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lou

    Hey sare! :D My favorite stanza was the fourth. It was lots of wonderful sensory images that I just adored and, from all the descriptions, you could imagine the relationship ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: vomitspit

    Haha, this reminds me of some of my old poems to get into a character's head. Although, like this poem, it wasn't very poetic at all. XD Conflict and such ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: No Man's Land

    Haha, it totally does sound unrealistic! :D But it does make sense that it was for World War I as opposed to World War II. That wouldn't have happened in ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: por que las cosas cambian.

    Hey nayex! Lovely poem! I really like the words used and the ideas involved and pretty much all the content. It's quite lovely! The only thing that kind of irks ...

    May 6, 2010


How odd I can have all this inside me and to you it’s just words.
— David Foster Wallace