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Re: Polishing Love
Hey bookgeek! First of all, these girls seem really, really immature. I thought they were in high school, but they're not! So it's a bit weird. Also! Why does she ...
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Re: All because of a boy. . .
Hey Layla! First of all, I boosted this to a 16+ because of the f-word in it. ;) So, this was a really good piece! I'm glad it's a happy ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: random absurd story
Wait! This seems incomplete! He covers his ears and then the wolves are knocked cold... and then what??? Does Mr. Car A. Rot do anything more? Does he kill them? ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: A Social Experiment- Read this first
This doesn't prove gender preferences as much as it displays whether you like Depp or Knightley. Just sayin', yo. Not very well broad. :P
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Limericks of the Cullens
Hey ultraviolet! :D These were some really cute poems! I always liked limericks... they're so bouncy and playful. :) Anyway, Renesmee's limerick was the best by far. The other two ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: scary artwork
Maki! This is really freaky! The main comment is that the syringe looks out of place because it's so orderly looking when everything else is very abstract, blood-soaked, and grotesque ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: vomitspit
LOL. It was the order that threw me off... girls don't generally order that quantity of food. I mean, I'm sure some do, but you have that whole weight and ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Clothes
Hahaha, actually, it's a senryu, which is a humorous haiku! Or something like that. Also, this is a pretty old poem! I'm going to lock it so that more people ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Untitled... For now...
Yay! A historical play! That's what Shakespeare wrote for the most part, you know? ;) Anyway, as far as this play goes, I think I want more. Your story is ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: vomitspit
What would be more poetic, actually, is you throwing everything away except for the last stanza. So you would cut all the fat and go straight to the main part ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Is there a way anyone can change their display name...
Yes! There is a way! But it's a bit of a hassle in several ways. We don't actually want users to change their names because it can change the code ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Lou
Hey sare! :D My favorite stanza was the fourth. It was lots of wonderful sensory images that I just adored and, from all the descriptions, you could imagine the relationship ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: vomitspit
Haha, this reminds me of some of my old poems to get into a character's head. Although, like this poem, it wasn't very poetic at all. XD Conflict and such ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: No Man's Land
Haha, it totally does sound unrealistic! :D But it does make sense that it was for World War I as opposed to World War II. That wouldn't have happened in ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: por que las cosas cambian.
Hey nayex! Lovely poem! I really like the words used and the ideas involved and pretty much all the content. It's quite lovely! The only thing that kind of irks ...
May 6, 2010
