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Hey talentedwriter! :D There's this one poem I read about someone who complains to this poet that all he writes is about depressing stuff. It's called, Terence, this is stupid ...

Hey hobbit! I really like the idea that you had about words leaving scars beyond all recognition... it's really powerful! I think that you should develop this idea a lot ...

Hey Hydey! Okay! To avoid any confusion, I'm going to call "he" the person you're writing about and "you" the narrator. Just because. Anyway, a quick note, but right now ...

Hey kingolions! So! You're writing about fire... neat! There's lots of imagery that you can use and you can really make this poem awesome. :) My first suggestion is to ...

Hey BFG! So I read this poem and, on the whole, I really like it! The imagery is fantastic and I loved the way you brought in the other senses ...

Happy sushi! :D First of all, a little typo! who's brains

Become a minion...

Hey UnknownPoet! I actually really really like the ambiguity of the piece... it makes my imagination run wild. I'm assuming that there's sex involved. Why? Why not? :D Especially since ...

I actually think Frost is over-rated. >.> That is to say, I adore some of his poems. Like "Home Burial." That's just a lovely poem with so much intensity inherent ...

Uh oh... an eavesdropper superhero? Dun dun dun! Are you psychic? O_O

Antifoam! The new rules are basically that you must BOW TO ME. Nah, not really. Welcome back! :D

I disagree with a major point of this... you're a fabulous writer. So don't worry... it's not a lie. Really. ;) About everything else? I don't know if this helps, ...

Hey Kah! I was able to see it using Mac magic. :) Anyway! My main comment is that it really doesn't look like a flower... it looks more like a ...

Hey samasaurus! :D Nice story! Very touching. I like how she keeps on talking to Oliver... it reminds me of several widows, actually. Anyway, I would like to suggest showing ...

Hey Gryphon! :D I just found this, thanks to freudianlisp, and I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story and all the characters. Even though the Bookworm ...