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Re: On The Way From The Beach
Hey Jasmine! So! This kind of reminds me of some of the older poems I did... which may or may not be a bad thing! :P Anyway! In the first ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Penetrating the Pale Horse (1)
Classy! I love you but... that title is soooo wrong on so many levels. XD Also, why is this in fantasy? It hardly seems like a fantasy short story at ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Need help with a question! Please! Calling all Women!
Humor works better than random poems. ;)
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
Snoink: Them's some sweet prokaryotes you've got there. I'll forward you along some adult stem cells :wink: Stem cells are decidedly eukaryotic and thus a pain to work with though! ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: what writing level should be used?
I say you go to the level which will give you the most money.
May 3, 2010 -
Re: The Awesome Project
Name: Rita Hayworth Species: Human Age: 21 Gender: Female Occupation: Engineer Starting Location: Forest. She doesn't appear with Saare Hathrim though. Appearance: Dweeby-looking. About 5'0", nerdy gl
May 3, 2010 -
Re: What Can I Say
Hey Ross! So, you're writing lyrics! Yay! :D Now, for the first verse, it seems really really cheesy. I don't know. I like the chorus and how it runs, but ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Sneak Peek: "Hate"
Hey ninjacookiemonster! :D (And yes, I love that name.) I think this isn't really an excerpt as much as it is a query! Which is fantastic, really... I'm attempting to ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: R.I.P. Pretty green leaf
Considering that you just viciously killed a leaf in the name of science, why not talk about it in scientific terms? No, it doesn't have eyes... but it does have ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Her Dawn(Temporary)
Unlocked by request!
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Her Dawn
Next time, bug somebody in green. We can unlock it for you. :) Anyway... there is this damsel lying in this grass with lots of insects whizzing around. She's been ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Waiting for the Breeze - intro
Hey talkingbird! Interesting beginning! I like the language and the way you bring us into the characters' lives. Now, my main suggestion here is to describe more about Maggie. In ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Butterfly Kiss
Hey Ninja Cookie Monster! :D One thing that I would really like to see in this is a description of Seth! Not necessarily a physical description, mind you, (though you ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Snoink, that's a really odd bug. It had something to do with the: [center][/center] tag because when I edited those out, everything work. Then I added them in again to ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Untitled(Yet): The End to Only Find a New Beginning
Dude, I read the bow and arrow bit, but when I went to reread it, I thought I was hallucinating. XD If he's far away from her, there's no way ...
May 2, 2010