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Eek! That sounds too fun! Next time, I want to go! D: He's the Prokaryotic organism in the bioreactor (aka, E. coli) and I am the gloved hand. Two by ...

Fries! A story! *pounces!* Now! For the story! First, the annoying scientist in me wants to remind you that it's pretty hard to outrun a bear. And out climb a ...

Hey guitargirl! Interesting way of formatting your story! I find it strange that she would be so open with her brother, but hey! Whatever works! Now, my main suggestion would ...

Hey Jester! At first, I was like, "Awww, what a sweet poem!" and then I kept reading it and my eyes widened. A suicide poem made from a butterfly? It ...

LOL! Hey Blair! Um... good question! I was always bad at introductory posts myself! You should probably talk about how you came on to YWS, what types of writing you ...

You look very wet!

MOOSE! Nah, just kidding. But I love your signature. :) So! You have some really interesting friends here! To make this even better, consider expanding on the two girl's relationships. ...

Hey Hannah! I agree with Navita... this is very hard to understand! I know you're trying to just throw us into the scene and draw us in that way, but ...

Hey Trix! Neat story... nice voice that you're using. I really like it! :D Now, this is a very captivating introduction because the story is captivating (yay!) but there's only ...

Hello again, BlackThought! I was actually kind of disappointed by the conclusion, if only because it looks like nothing was really settled, and thus, nothing was really concluded. Maybe I'm ...

Hey BlackThought! Very grabbing beginning! Sucked me right in! To edit, consider talking about how Naomi and your narrator met. Right now, we have a good feeling of Nye's past, ...

Omg! It's me and Prokaryote!

Look at a thesaurus! A thesaurus is your best friend. :)

This story looks weird on my computer! Mac OSX: 10.5.8 Firefox 3.6.3 It looks like this: glitch.jpg Text of story (with codes): Hi all. I wrote this for my English ...

Hey Kitrosemon! Welcome to YWS! :D In this poem, you have a bunch of thoughts together that are interesting! In fact, they are so interesting that you can probably split ...