Snoink

Hey Joulene! I critiqued your story! :D Anyway, don't worry! Just browse around, get a feeling for the community, and you'll be fine. Also, if you have any questions, feel ...

Hey Sunstar! The main thing I want to comment on is that he hears all these stories of who he was and who he is to become... from whom? It ...

Hey Poet! So, the main problem I have with this poem is that it looks like you use words that just don't fit in what you're describing! Like corrode... chemically, ...

Hey Arahnia! Actually, I like the other poem that I reviewed better. Although this has a cute story associated with it, you had to tell the story at the end ...

Hey Queenie! :D First of all, typos! You have a couple. Run it through a spell checker and it'll be a lot more awesome. :) Next of all, I agree ...

Hey jolene! :D This is a pretty interesting beginning! Lots of action, lots of intense moments... I like it! Now, the main thing that you're going to want to fix ...

Ack! Ack! Bill the Cat! Omg, your avvie is amazing, RedBird! :D Now, to the poem! It's really really random right now... which makes sense because you don't even know ...

Hey Lord Anzius! This is a very skimpy intro for such an important question! What you generally do in introductions is you introduce previous ideas of who God is by ...

JD! First of all, nice story! I kind of liked it! I want more information as to who Bryan is and how she met him, etc., but not bad! So ...

Thanks a lot to all of you. Thanks for liking it. And Snoink the dresses I create are for those typical models. I don't think i would wear the top ...

Hey Oisin! Neat name! :D Now, on to the story! I thought it was a bit strange. You had all this pretty language describing someone puking out alcohol. And I ...

Hey Love! :D This was a rather sad story! I wasn't expecting to be this sad! I mean, mostly what people do to make things sad is to randomly kill ...

Hey Eli! This is a perfect example why adjectives and adverbs should be avoided like the devil in poetry! Adjectives serve the same purpose as salt. Put it on a ...

Hey Arahnia! What a lovely name! And what a lovely concept! Cliff diving has always terrified me, but it's fantastic... I'm pretty sure that if I were to write a ...

This. Is. The. Most. Awesome. Poem. Ever. The main comment I have is that I object to the whole ham part. Less ham, more pickle. Also, I love your rhyme ...