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LOL! That's awesome! The ocean is freezing in Washington! I've been there and usually I'm in the poofiest jacket possible... it's really cold. And when the water gets in your ...

Eek! I really, really like this little smidgen of dialogue! It's very interesting! Plus, the people sound like they genuinely know and can converse with each other which is fabulous! ...

Teehee, curly hair? You must be speaking of someone else! ;) But no! Some really good imagery here! My favorite was little piggies snuffling around... that verb, snuffling, made me ...

Hahaha! The dancing elephant is cute, but I would lose that and the whole *walks away smugly* part in serious poetry. ;) As far as your poem goes, right now ...

Eek! Your username is sooooo cute! And I demand a comic book! That's the coolest thing anyway... cool illustrations, awesome characters... writing pales in comparison! :D Also... swimming? In Washingt

Mr. Knightly and OverEasy>> Calm down. Circular reasoning is by far a lesser fallacy than personal attack.

Hey BeautifulDoom! Okay, so first of all, I've studied chemistry (in fact, I'm just about to get my biochemical engineering degree! :D), so I'm kind of a nerd! Anyway, rust ...

Bubbles! Grif was... MELTING! He started saying, "I'm melting! I'm melting!" Then the Wicked Witch of the West was like, "No you foomanshooz, you can't steal my line." So she ...

"WAIT, WHAT HAPPENED?" cried Snoink. "DID WE END ON AN ANTICLIMATIC NOTE?" "YES, YES WE DID," Grif said. "THE LAST TIME WE WERE HERE, I WAS THROWN INTO A COW." ...

Why not?

You probably know this by now, but for blogs I get this: Script error: local_199977.xml does not exist. Please create a blank file named local_199977.xml.

One of my friends forced me to join. Initially, I was reluctant, but now I love it. :) And welcome! Hopefully, you will love it too. :)

Hey Bandgeek! The ending was a very good cliffhanger... made me wonder what was going to happen next. :) The next thing you're going to want to do is make ...

This idea doesn't have enough to really make a novel. Add more to it (especially on the conflict side) and see where that takes you.

What I love about it is that the person giving advice is more concerned with the game than the friend. Yeeeeeeeah... mistaken priorities much? XD