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Hi Nicole! Welcome to YWS! :D 1. In the past, you could make a brief commentary! Now, that is no more. Not sure why, but hey, whatever! So no worries... ...

Do you have Flash installed on your computer?

Were you banned from the chat? (You would know it if you were.) If not, it's probably glitchy. What kind of internet browser (Internet Explorer, Firefox, Safari, Netscape...?) do you ...

In this first stanza, I think the problems are the same -- quantum, alveoli, cobalt (what is cobalt anyway? :P) Cobalt is a beautiful blue (or red, depending on your ...

Is everyone's work in this journal?? Not everyone's! That would be too big. But a bunch of members are in. :)

Post in the novel forum. At the very top of your new post, it should ask you which project you're writing. Select your novel and add your chapter! It's rather ...

Hey Eli! The main thing I have against this poem is it's very telly! So basically, you're telling us who she is, but you're not actually showing us anything special ...

Hey Ray! :D This may just be a pet peeve of mine, but don't start off with saying that there are no words to describe [insert something here] because as ...

Tangent, mi amor! Thanks for posting this. :) Now, your poem can basically be broken up into three parts! 1. Orca whales swimming in a too small sea for their ...

Parodies = awesome! Especially Star Wars parodies. They're just fun. :) A couple of things! You misspelled "Matrix" several times throughout this piece... it shouldn't be "Martix!" Also, this might ...

Hey scary panda! :D Definitely very random! I was kind of lost, because I'm not very familiar with why this scene is relevant, so my advice is to make it ...

Chat bug! SPEW signed up on Safari 4.0.5 (Mac OS 10.5.8) and even though he kept logging off, it still said he was there. Kind of weird!

You probably know this by now, but the novels stuff! :D Although it counts for reviews now for your overall count, it doesn't count for reviews in the leaderboards, nor ...

Okay, so I was reading this again, just because it's an interesting problem! Anyway, this time I noticed this: It was easy to track. Mickey Mulligan, would-be bully, full-time idiot, ...

LOL. Yeah... I cut out Chapter 1 and so Chapter 3 is now Chapter 2. It's much more streamlined! Sadie's 15! I think that's young, but then again, that was ...