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Old version: Chapter 1 She had been sold? Over and over again, the freak repeated this to herself, still unwilling to believe it. Nobody wanted an older freak, nobody. They ...

Hahahaha! This is why clarinets should be FEARED and RESPECTED. And no, I am not in any way, shape, or form, biased. No siree! Moving on with the critique... ;) ...

LOL! I don't know what an ode is like either... base it after Pablo Neruda's Ode to the Tomato! Except... less blood, please? :)

LOL! I was wondering if you liked pigs too... the pigfarts thing gave you away. ;) I used to not eat pork, but... well... temptations abound. And I have a ...

Plagiarism is when you directly copy whole sections, or directly copy and then modify it just the slightest amounts... for example, putting "he" where "she" is and so on. Also, ...

Hey Kat! I'm not really good with lyrics, but I'll give it a shot anyway. Hopefully, I'll help you! :) One of the things that I was wondering about was ...

Hahaha...yeah. I figured it belonged there because it was definitely a novel. :3 Sorry for the confusion! :D

Hello ATreeah! I love camp stories! They're just so neat, and they invoke some very fond memories for myself. :) With that said, I think you can definitely expand on ...

Hey Duggie! :D One of my favorite series of all time is the "Time Warp Trio" series. It's insane... and it features guys going into alternate worlds all the time. ...

Hey, Matthemus! This story seems a bit quick! At first, it seems like it's a scene from Aladdin ... then it turns into a world opening up... and then it ...

Hey Chelarose! You have a very beautiful username. :) Now, for your story! I found many of the thoughts very interesting and it was, all in all, written well... always ...

Teehee, I used to love it when my teachers would assign us these sorts of stories. Actually, one of those stories was the thing that started me with creative writing ...

Hey Smexay! Right now, this story needs some direction! Yeah, we're sad that she's sad and writing letters to her dad who has been eight years old, etc. But what ...

Hi smashles! :D The best way you can learn how to find your way around is to explore, really. :) However, if you don't want to do that... "Read/Write" is ...

Ooooh! I actually really liked this! It's seriously one of my favorite poems on YWS... and that's saying A LOT. *likes* Okay, so now that that's done, there were only ...