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Dam Beavery straight! :D

Haha, you're among good company! I remember I did the same when I joined when I was your age. And it was awesome. And somehow, people loved me and feared ...

Good start, good start... but you need more destruction and stuff. This is simply not a finished story! This is the introduction! You need: - Deepening conflict. - A resolution ...

Hey Ikafe! :D First of all: whoa! Back up! This persona actually... killed her lover???? OMG. That is so completely dramatic! The first thing I'm wondering is why? I mean... ...

Biffle! Where are all the carrots? There are definitely not enough carrots in here! And dams! Where are all the dams? Don't you dare censor yourself! All in all, I ...

LOL! No, it's a good thing! I like having opinions about characters... it makes them that much more real to me! It's when I don't really have any opinions on ...

Lol! No, it doesn't have to be the best and it doesn't have to be correct. I like what Scott Adams said about it: "Creativity is allowing yourself to make ...

Hahaha, I knooooooow. Restarting stories is a pain! But as somebody who is currently rewriting her beginning, I can tell you that, as long as you have a direction of ...

Hey fries (again)! I couldn't leave chapter 1 part 1 all by itself, could I? ;) Okay! So first of all, I want to comment on a little grammatical nitpick ...

Hey fries! :D Okay! So first of all, I want more drama! Right now, she has this terrifying dream, which makes it a really dramatic opening! But then she wakes ...

There are more people who have the Reviewer 2 badge than just Kitty and me! For instance, Writersdomain has one too. So we're not the only two! We just have ...

Hey seana! One thing you really need to do is to write in correct grammar. Right now, it's really hard to tell what you're saying because you don't capitalize the ...

O_o ...discuss?

PM Nate just in case. I'm sure he'll want to hear about this. LOL. Don't. It'll be fixed up in a day, honest. It's probably just a technical malfunction.

Click it! Together, we will rule YWS! We shall overcome!