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Hey UnknownPoet! As far as hate poetry goes, this is pretty lame! In fact, it seems rather comedic all in all, in a very crass way of course. If you ...

Hey Auteur! :D You have a fantastic last line! The problem is that it's the strongest line of the poem and your title. So I was expecting more. :P I ...

Hey Peanut! The main thing that bugs me (which probably doesn't bug anybody else) is how painless this seems. As somebody who has had a head injury before, I can ...

Hey Shexay! The main thing I'm wondering about as far as this poem goes is why is this person falling off a cliff (or an otherwise tall thing... it could ...

Hey Arris! This is a much better poem than the first one I looked at, so yay for you! Now, make sure not to do that ugly thing where you ...

Hey Arris! My favorite parts of the poem are these: Silence, Silence, it calls for noise; like the glittering water, splashed by koi. The whispering and the wavering, the croaking ...

Hey brainychic! Neat experimentation! :D Just a couple of things! You develop one of your characters, the callow boy, and talk about how he loves and tends this one tulip, ...

Hey Forest! :D You keep on using similes and such to say what the person is like, but your similes never really tell what the person is like at all. ...

Also, if you post your work here and you ever get plagiarized, just contact an admin (in this case, Nate) or a mod (their names are in green) and they ...

Well, you've come to the right place! People who don't love writing are often kicked out and left to the vultures. ;) (Nah, just kidding.) We hope we inspire you ...

What basically happens for featured member lately is Nate asks in the moderator forum, "So, which member has been particularly helpful this month?" Then the mods respond with their choices ...

For a co-writer, the best thing you can do on YWS is to immerse yourself, get to know the community, review, and then offer to write. It'll be easier for ...

Wait! What was your username? :D Medieval fantasy is kind of awesome! And European swordsmanship? GEEP! AWESOME. I'm actually taking a history course this quarter that's supposed to be about ...

Hey, I remember you! :D Welcome back! I also went through a writing drought when I was 15... it was awful! But because of it, I became an even stronger ...

I love writing poetry and short stories. I don't think i could ever write a huge novel, or at least right now. If you ever want to write a novel, ...