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Hey, Biffle, this is pretty neat! Lots of action, in any case. :) And, ever since Animorphs, I have a soft spot for alien possessions of people. :) Now, when ...

Haha, what a quirky, lovely story! :D A couple of thoughts! I kind of wish that you didn't have the whole grade drama in the beginning. It seems a bit ...

Teehee, you're totally a thief. XD I read the first paragraph, wondered when you were going to start the story, read the next part, wondered when you were going to ...

Ahhhh, forbidden love! Hope everything works out in the end. :) As far as story goes, this seems largely unfinished! Which kind of makes sense, as it is a true ...

Oh wow, our stories are very similar! I also pretty much stopped writing when I was 16 and then turned back to it when things started getting tough. It's very ...

Yay! I'm glad we don't have to lecture you on internet safety. :) Sorry about losing all your work... that sort of thing sucks! But I'm glad you're still pursuing ...

Haha, yes! Sad and depressed is an unfortunate state to be in. :) Welcome to YWS! And don't be afraid to dance here... we have plenty of first aid staff ...

Hey Dani, welcome to YWS! And you're an artist? Excellent! What sort of art do you like to focus on? :)

Here is my grumpy teacher critique, lol. It's very grumpy, but hopefully it's still helpful? :? In 'Out Walked Mel' by Paula Boock, Mel is the character I have been ...

Chatspeak is weird. You should cut it out. If you want to give it a more authentic style with misspellings... well... that's a gimmick. And gimmicks, in general, can be ...

Eek, thanks for adding the non-fiction category! It'll make buying my textbooks that much easier. :)

Since when has writing practice become silly? Letting your standards go and allowing your writing to be less than what you picture in your mind is great practice. It changes ...

Hey Toga! :D So! I really liked this... I mean, come on. It has a woman with a gun who stalking after a man who's killed her son? Pretty cool ...

Stopping the procrastination long enough to write.

Purchasing textbooks has never been more fun! :D Also! Add that Nonfiction section. ;) EDIT: As another thought, what if you add a "store" tab on the black line linking ...