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Rosey>> I don't understand your comment. Where specifically does she mention how bad everything is? The overall tone of the narrative is dark, I'll admit, and the description of the ...

You need more Bond movies! :(

CONGRATULATIONS, JACKE!!!!

Kibble>> Thanks for confirming my suspicions. It is a little long, isn't it? :) I'm definitely going to tweak that part, especially as I rewrite the beginning of chapter 2. ...

“Yeah she is,” Michael answered watching the girl below dance, her beauty far surpassing her grace, which was magnificent in itself. Maybe he was over-exaggerating her beauty, but it was ...

Hey Durriedog! First of all, I would cut out the smiley. Why? Because if you have to put :D in the middle of a poem, that probably means that you're ...

Haha! Oh my... I didn't even consider the possibility of this story! You are quite creative! :D A quick thing, first! "Lets take em!" I prombted. No need to prombt ...

Nutty>> Thanks for your comments! You're right about chapter 1... I've been struggling with it since I wrote it several years ago and I'm probably going to get rid of ...

Haha, I completely forgot about this poem. It's actually a senryu.

One day, I hope to be a scientist quoted in The Onion.

Hahaha, maybe! But I kind of like that ambiguity. :D Anyway, if you want your story to take precedence in your poem, consider making the details more specific. So, for ...

I like my villains creative, well-rounded, and smart. I like for them to be driven, persistent, and well-spoken. I like it when they're very proper and polite. I like it ...

Ooooh... good idea, Jiggly! I'll play around with it. Thanks! :D

Hey there, Boston! :D scratch down you're back

Hey Twixt! I think you might want to get rid of the first paragraph, if only because it didn't really catch me and your actual human story was a lot ...