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Simply put, it's rather boring and dry. There is so much character development in "The Giver" and it's a really powerful story. We learn to care for Jonas and Gabe ...

Eek, Pen, I didn't see you up there! Thanks for the nit-pick! That paragraph is awkwardly written. I'll rewrite it soon! :) Hmm... Intriguingly vulnerable? Interesting description of her! I ...

Karsten>> *freaks out* No, but seriously, thank you. I thought you were only answering my question... I didn't realize that you didn't have any critique! It's highly flattering. :) Grphyon>> ...

Eli>> I just rewrote a large chunk of Chapter 4 last night at an awfully late time and I would like to sit on it for a while before posting ...

Hehehe, in a way, the artist in me kind of likes that. It's like that line from "The Year of the Cat" which goes: "She comes out of the sun ...

I totally heard of that number. ;) And yay!

I read till ' Sandpaper stay still.........". i left in the middle because I want a rating so I could read it. I foyu could do that I am ready ...

Note to mods: Capital letters are fully intended in this title. ^_^ Anyway, these are the first three chapters of FREAK. Besides any other comments you have, there is one ...

Yay! Math! :D I would say to geek it out even more. As one of the resident math tutors of YWS (yes, I know, I'm pathetic) I would love to ...

Psh, killing characters is fun! But killing main characters? Laaaaaaaaaame! It's like, "Oh, hmmmmm... let me see, I'm not quite sure how to end this properly, so instead of attempting ...

Speaking of ee cummings! My mom and I adore this quote: i thank You God for most this amazing day: for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue ...

As this is a piece about a Christian's belief on God, I think the biggest thing that is missing from this essay is the actual text from the bible. There ...

I'm game! :D

Show, don't tell. This is boring. On a similar note, although poetry is about exposing truths of our lives, reading poetry that tells us this or that is really not ...

Cold fusion is impossible because it violates several laws of thermodynamics. Just sayin'. ;)