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Hehe, cute poem! :D But one question... marshmallow peeps? Isn't that a candy for Easter instead of St. Valentine's Day? Or did the Peeps company expand to give out heart-shaped ...

Hey Matt! :D It seems like in your poem you use lots of repetition and such of the same image over and over again. But this can get rather boring. ...

Pig! :D

Five to fifteen minutes. If it takes any longer, I am severely distracted.

@Galerius.....? DON'T ASK.

*Locked*

I had two mild concussions that I fully recovered from. The last one was a couple of months ago, actually! I didn't lose consciousness or anything. But for a couple ...

Prokayote is absolutely right. I would hate it if some of my pieces from when I was 16 were brought up again. :)

Hey lonewolf! Welcome to YWS! :D Your script is a little short and rather disconnected, which may explain why your filming was interrupted constantly! Try lengthening it up and giving ...

Haha! And apparently, when I had written this, I had forgotten that it was almost Valentine's Day. AND REALLY. What is more romantic than romantic fiction? :D

Hi Mrs. Chaos! Welcome to YWS! :D So You started on a pretty interesting note! They were obviously very uncomfortable with each other, and that sort of conflict is pretty ...

Hahaha! What an interesting story! Definitely didn't suspect that ending! Now, one thing... the ending is a little confusing because it doesn't really make it clear who he's fantasizing over... ...

Hey emmylou! :D So! You started off with a lot of action, which was really really cool! I mean, come on... somebody getting branded? How much more awesome could you ...

Hey snickerdooly! Your name is sooooo cute. I mean it! :D Okay, now on with the review! What I kept on wondering when I read this piece was, "Why would ...

Okay. So I was talking with one of my writerly friends in real life and I mentioned that I was working on YWS, and she said, "Oh, that kiddy site." ...