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Stop . using .... gimmicky ....... tricks ............. like ................... this. Not only do they detract from your poem, but they make the poem more about the gimmick than your ...

Hey Kate! One thing that kind of bugged me... your constant repetition of "dishwasher's bane" or "bane of dishwashers." You really don't have to say that all the time. :P ...

Oooh! I liked this! :D One thing... I really liked the subject and the way you put it and the questions you put in our heads, so that was fine! ...

As a side note completely unrelated to your poem, when you said "lamb" I was reminded of this: Yeah... it's pretty epic! It's an extreme herding sort of thing! As ...

Hi Eric! Right now, it seems like this poem is mostly made of a bunch of ideas that you thought were cool into a bunch of ordered phrases that you ...

Hey Jenny! So, this could be because I'm sick and I can't focus on much, but it was really hard to focus on your poem because you kept on going ...

Hi Alex! Welcome to YWS! :D In this poem, you show us a brutal image and keep on describing what is going on, but you never actually give us an ...

Psh! I'm sick and can barely think straight and you're apologizing for confusing me? It's kind of impossible not to confuse me now, so no worries! :lol: Actually, your story ...

Wait! Warriors = Warrior Cats? Or am I completely confused? Not that I know either series, but still... One thing that I wondered about! Foxes are really shy creatures and ...

Your name is AWESOME. I'll go check out your stuff, though understand that my head is kind of clouded up (I have a cold) and I'm not really thinking straight. ...

Me? Try to take over YWS? >.>

I admit... I like to make my beautiful women complete biatches. It's a bad habit of mine. But it's remarkably fun to write!

Hey Jame! Nice poem! At first I thought it would be twisted, a la "Man of La Mancha" but it wasn't! It was oddly sweet. There's just one thing that ...

Oh my gosh! I love this picture! It's so beautiful and I love the brightness of the eyes of the puppy... something is going in his mind, definitely! And it ...

And this is precisely why I am glad that Obama is working on change for the college football divisions. This is clearly what we should be striving for.