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Hey Vera! What an awful relationship! She's with him... why? I don't know. While I was reading the poem, I kept thinking, "Okay, so we're going to find out what ...

Hey Random! Sorry about your friend. That's never cool. :( For your poem, trying making it a tad more specific. Right now, it sounds like somebody stabbed in her in ...

Hmmm... I don't think this member is with us anymore? In any case, I'm locking this. ^_^

Hey Spiral! :D What this poem needs is some personality! We have a bunch of gloomy images, some laments about broken hearts... but nothing about you personally. And what can ...

Ooh! I like this poem! :D One thing that you may consider changing is the structure. At the end of every stanza, you have it break off in an ellipse, ...

Hey Awakening! :D First of all, check for spelling errors... there are a couple in here! Run it through a spell check and you'll see. ;) So! I liked you ...

I don't read that much anymore (yeah, I suck... I blame school and an engineering major) but what about people that just enjoy being mean for the thrill of it? ...

Oooh! I really liked this poem! Very quirky and lovely... very nice. Definitely a star for you! Just a couple of grammar mistakes: Looks like its a pretty cloudy day.

Eek! The first three lines are full of awesome. I love the way how you make happiness dance... it's very pretty! So a star for you! :D The main thing ...

Awesome layout! :D The poem needs trimming though! There are a lot of useless words that are mostly there to fill in the staircase layout--which is awesome! I love the ...

Hehe, but jealousy does often have a role with bullying. That's why I bullied my little sister when I was younger! ;) Though... it wasn't just because of that. Usually, ...

Haha! Nice use of irony then. :D Sometimes on YWS, people will make these poems and seriously make them like this and expect us readers to think they're the bestest ...

Hola! This, to me, seemed like a watered-down version of a psalm, which is really sad! I love the psalms... it was a combination of psalms, Shel Silverstein, and Pablo ...

Hey Rockstar! :D This poem seems less like lyric poetry and more like lyrics since you have a repeated section over again. Just so you know! If you want me ...

But, but! Science is awesome! :P This poem reminded me of Walt Whitman's When I Heard the Learn'd Astronomer ... which is a good thing! I like that poem. However, ...