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  • Lounge, The Re: Are you afraid that you'll lose it?

    I never had it. XD

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Inseparable

    Hey midnight! Welcome to YWS! :D Nice poem! I like the beginning especially. One thing I noticed though.... the first part seemed to be addressed to the reader, which I ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Greatest Joy

    Eek! Cute poem!

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: I Would Endure

    *Moved to Fanfiction*

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love " You and Him "

    Hi slandie! Welcome to YWS! :D I like the musings of love in the beginning. But... well... there are a lot of "me" "I" "my" in this poem. A lot. ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Thanks Snoink (more review stars)

    O.O *feels the need to go review more* That's the spirit! :D

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Poetry Discussion Re: thoughts of a dying atheist by muse

    I thought it was just talking about how a dying atheist was thinking that the end of his life was coming and there would be no hope for the future... ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Life's Whisper

    Hi Jasmine! :D Normally, these repetitive poems with the same style repeating over and over again annoy me, but I actually liked this! It was cool and I liked how ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Lesson in Dying

    Wait! Typo? Where??? And yeah... I write poetry sometimes. XD

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Writers Corner Re: What's Your Writing Style?

    *Moved to Writer's Corner*

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Requiem

    Hey, Warrior Princess! :D Nice use of imagery and stuff... it's really pretty! Plus, the rhyming was fantastic. This is a really solid draft. Now, consider adding more about her ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Never Won

    Hey Jynx! First of all, welcome to YWS! Mind you, you've joined like... two months ago, but seeing as you only have 9 posts, I haven't had a chance to ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: So happy I could howl!

    But... but... science!!!! *cries* Okay... I'll forgive you... maybe. :P What's next? Well... you should go out in the forums and explore! More particularly, you should join this group: Our ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: If comedy had a smell...

    Fart smell. XD

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Because of Your Grace

    Hey Mel! :D Nice poem! I agree with all of empress's edits... that will help trim the poem and make it more readable without deleting any of the content... always ...

    Jan 6, 2010


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
— SunsetTree