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  • Lounge, The Re: Are you afraid that you'll lose it?

    I never had it. XD

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Inseparable

    Hey midnight! Welcome to YWS! :D Nice poem! I like the beginning especially. One thing I noticed though.... the first part seemed to be addressed to the reader, which I ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Greatest Joy

    Eek! Cute poem!

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: I Would Endure

    *Moved to Fanfiction*

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love " You and Him "

    Hi slandie! Welcome to YWS! :D I like the musings of love in the beginning. But... well... there are a lot of "me" "I" "my" in this poem. A lot. ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Thanks Snoink (more review stars)

    O.O *feels the need to go review more* That's the spirit! :D

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Poetry Discussion Re: thoughts of a dying atheist by muse

    I thought it was just talking about how a dying atheist was thinking that the end of his life was coming and there would be no hope for the future... ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Life's Whisper

    Hi Jasmine! :D Normally, these repetitive poems with the same style repeating over and over again annoy me, but I actually liked this! It was cool and I liked how ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Lesson in Dying

    Wait! Typo? Where??? And yeah... I write poetry sometimes. XD

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Writers Corner Re: What's Your Writing Style?

    *Moved to Writer's Corner*

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Requiem

    Hey, Warrior Princess! :D Nice use of imagery and stuff... it's really pretty! Plus, the rhyming was fantastic. This is a really solid draft. Now, consider adding more about her ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Never Won

    Hey Jynx! First of all, welcome to YWS! Mind you, you've joined like... two months ago, but seeing as you only have 9 posts, I haven't had a chance to ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: So happy I could howl!

    But... but... science!!!! *cries* Okay... I'll forgive you... maybe. :P What's next? Well... you should go out in the forums and explore! More particularly, you should join this group: Our ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: If comedy had a smell...

    Fart smell. XD

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Because of Your Grace

    Hey Mel! :D Nice poem! I agree with all of empress's edits... that will help trim the poem and make it more readable without deleting any of the content... always ...

    Jan 6, 2010


A thing of beauty is a joy forever; its loveliness increases...
— John Keats