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Re: Are you afraid that you'll lose it?
I never had it. XD
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Inseparable
Hey midnight! Welcome to YWS! :D Nice poem! I like the beginning especially. One thing I noticed though.... the first part seemed to be addressed to the reader, which I ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: My Greatest Joy
Eek! Cute poem!
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: I Would Endure
*Moved to Fanfiction*
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Love " You and Him "
Hi slandie! Welcome to YWS! :D I like the musings of love in the beginning. But... well... there are a lot of "me" "I" "my" in this poem. A lot. ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Thanks Snoink (more review stars)
O.O *feels the need to go review more* That's the spirit! :D
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: thoughts of a dying atheist by muse
I thought it was just talking about how a dying atheist was thinking that the end of his life was coming and there would be no hope for the future... ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Life's Whisper
Hi Jasmine! :D Normally, these repetitive poems with the same style repeating over and over again annoy me, but I actually liked this! It was cool and I liked how ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: A Lesson in Dying
Wait! Typo? Where??? And yeah... I write poetry sometimes. XD
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: What's Your Writing Style?
*Moved to Writer's Corner*
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: My Requiem
Hey, Warrior Princess! :D Nice use of imagery and stuff... it's really pretty! Plus, the rhyming was fantastic. This is a really solid draft. Now, consider adding more about her ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Never Won
Hey Jynx! First of all, welcome to YWS! Mind you, you've joined like... two months ago, but seeing as you only have 9 posts, I haven't had a chance to ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: So happy I could howl!
But... but... science!!!! *cries* Okay... I'll forgive you... maybe. :P What's next? Well... you should go out in the forums and explore! More particularly, you should join this group: Our ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: If comedy had a smell...
Fart smell. XD
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Because of Your Grace
Hey Mel! :D Nice poem! I agree with all of empress's edits... that will help trim the poem and make it more readable without deleting any of the content... always ...
Jan 6, 2010
