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I never had it. XD

Hey midnight! Welcome to YWS! :D Nice poem! I like the beginning especially. One thing I noticed though.... the first part seemed to be addressed to the reader, which I ...

Eek! Cute poem!

*Moved to Fanfiction*

Hi slandie! Welcome to YWS! :D I like the musings of love in the beginning. But... well... there are a lot of "me" "I" "my" in this poem. A lot. ...

O.O *feels the need to go review more* That's the spirit! :D

I thought it was just talking about how a dying atheist was thinking that the end of his life was coming and there would be no hope for the future... ...

Hi Jasmine! :D Normally, these repetitive poems with the same style repeating over and over again annoy me, but I actually liked this! It was cool and I liked how ...

Wait! Typo? Where??? And yeah... I write poetry sometimes. XD

*Moved to Writer's Corner*

Hey, Warrior Princess! :D Nice use of imagery and stuff... it's really pretty! Plus, the rhyming was fantastic. This is a really solid draft. Now, consider adding more about her ...

Hey Jynx! First of all, welcome to YWS! Mind you, you've joined like... two months ago, but seeing as you only have 9 posts, I haven't had a chance to ...

But... but... science!!!! *cries* Okay... I'll forgive you... maybe. :P What's next? Well... you should go out in the forums and explore! More particularly, you should join this group: Our ...

Fart smell. XD

Hey Mel! :D Nice poem! I agree with all of empress's edits... that will help trim the poem and make it more readable without deleting any of the content... always ...