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Hi Margaret! :D One of things I found weird was that they really didn't want to seem separated! So I have to wonder... with everything gone, why would they separate ...

Yes sir!

Haha, this reminds me of a song called, "Woman in Chains." It goes like this: You better love loving you better behave You better love loving you better behave Woman ...

Just to repeat Nate, the idea is to change from placing you in a group to rewarding you individually. The shift from being known as an instructor to having earned ...

Banned for being corrected!

Oy! Totally understand about the short stories turned epic novels. So annoying! But still, at least it's fun to write them. :) Fan fiction, eh? What sorts of things do ...

Awww! Your username is absolutely adorable! Anyway, welcome to YWS! If you need any help, just PM me! :D

Whoa, calm down. If you want reviews, the best thing to do is to review other people. You'll get noticed a LOT easier. :P Anyway... there are a lot of ...

Red pens belong to the reviewers, silly! :P

Hi Mentalist! :) I just wanted to ask a bunch of questions which will hopefully be helpful. First of all, I kind of think it's strange. He's a pick pocket ...

Haha, weird! I've never heard of YWO! However, I am really slow on joining writing sites or knowing anything about them, really... I only joined YWS because a TYWC member ...

Banned for being adorable!

I think the badges thing is a cool idea, but the ones you posted, Nate, looked very clutter-ish. If you did go through with this, I would suggest something like ...

Lovely poem! :) I like most of it, but there was a line that I didn't quite enjoy... Just a handful of sand to thrust The way you're using this ...

LOL! Clever way to satirize it all... I find it especially humorous that your reviewers generally didn't catch the satire. ;) My main problem was this: (an inappropriately repugnant word ...