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Re: No Escape
Hey Tayla! One thing that kind of confused me... which concentration camp is this? I mean, I'm assuming it's a Nazi-run concentration camp since that's what's typical, but I'm not ...
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Re: Read my short story! :)
Hey Tayla! A story? Eek! All right. I'll review it... I'm always up for an excellent short story! But you should review some pieces too. That way, you'll make people ...
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Re: The Sharpest Blade
Hey Selene! This is what I would call a music video poem. You know how some music videos go from image to image without any congruity? This is what this ...
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Re: Nature's Two Hands
Hey Joy! I did tell you I would look at your stuff? No? ;) I want to point out something to you! Look how many adjectives you have! A satisfied ...
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Re: Alert! New Writer Aboard!
Hey, Joy! :D Welcome to YWS! Poetry and short stories? Interesting! I'll head right over and see if I can give you any useful critiques. :) Also? You should be ...
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Re: Hello :)
Mwhahaha! We shall do evil things together! Actually, at the moment, it's more of a scavenger hunt/writing prompts place. But it's 100% evil, so no worries! :)
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Re: Hello :)
Haha, you guys are crazy! Welcome to YWS! I'm a Snoink. :)
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Re: Hope is a thing with feathers
I adore this poem. The main metaphor here is hope as a bird, found in every land, singing in tune and clearly through any storm or problem that comes across ...
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Re: How Beastly The Bourgeois Is
I actually didn't like this poem that much. The word "bourgeois" made me think of French or Russian and when it was English, I was rather confused. Yes, it can ...
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Re: Hello!
Aww, but novels are fun! Have you ever tried Nanowrimo (in which you write 50K in November)? You might actually like that! And yay for welcomers! :D Also welcome to ...
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Re: Durrie's Newb Photos!
Durrie! They're mostly blurry! And in a not good way. Make sure that you can focus it! The best ones are five and seven. For five>> Try making the lens ...
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Re: Change One Letter
star
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Re: Change One Letter
snark
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Re: Change One Letter
snake
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Re: Editing Tips Anyone?
Be prepared to feel like you're the worst writer ever and that there is too much editing to be done and the project is far too big and that you'll ...
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