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  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: No Escape

    Hey Tayla! One thing that kind of confused me... which concentration camp is this? I mean, I'm assuming it's a Nazi-run concentration camp since that's what's typical, but I'm not ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Read my short story! :)

    Hey Tayla! A story? Eek! All right. I'll review it... I'm always up for an excellent short story! But you should review some pieces too. That way, you'll make people ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Sharpest Blade

    Hey Selene! This is what I would call a music video poem. You know how some music videos go from image to image without any congruity? This is what this ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Nature's Two Hands

    Hey Joy! I did tell you I would look at your stuff? No? ;) I want to point out something to you! Look how many adjectives you have! A satisfied ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Alert! New Writer Aboard!

    Hey, Joy! :D Welcome to YWS! Poetry and short stories? Interesting! I'll head right over and see if I can give you any useful critiques. :) Also? You should be ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello :)

    Mwhahaha! We shall do evil things together! Actually, at the moment, it's more of a scavenger hunt/writing prompts place. But it's 100% evil, so no worries! :)

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello :)

    Haha, you guys are crazy! Welcome to YWS! I'm a Snoink. :)

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Hope is a thing with feathers

    I adore this poem. The main metaphor here is hope as a bird, found in every land, singing in tune and clearly through any storm or problem that comes across ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Poetry Discussion Re: How Beastly The Bourgeois Is

    I actually didn't like this poem that much. The word "bourgeois" made me think of French or Russian and when it was English, I was rather confused. Yes, it can ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello!

    Aww, but novels are fun! Have you ever tried Nanowrimo (in which you write 50K in November)? You might actually like that! And yay for welcomers! :D Also welcome to ...

    Dec 28, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Durrie's Newb Photos!

    Durrie! They're mostly blurry! And in a not good way. Make sure that you can focus it! The best ones are five and seven. For five>> Try making the lens ...

    Dec 28, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Change One Letter

    star

    Dec 28, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Change One Letter

    snark

    Dec 28, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Change One Letter

    snake

    Dec 28, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Editing Tips Anyone?

    Be prepared to feel like you're the worst writer ever and that there is too much editing to be done and the project is far too big and that you'll ...

    Dec 28, 2009


And then, as if written by the hand of a bad novelist, an incredible thing happened.
— Bartimaeus of Uruk